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JohnnyPsycho Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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Don't worry about it, Kas, I certainly understand... sometimes it takes me several drafts and rewrites before I get anything done when I write, because I second-guess myself constantly. Trust me, sometimes all you have to do is not worry and let the words write themselves. A cheesy answer, I know, but it works. And if you find you've written yourself in a corner, don't take it as a failure, just an unforseen destination... sometimes taking the story in a whole new direction can be even more fun than you'd think.
On a related note, I'm writing a short story about a cross-dressing character (female who dresses and largely identifies as male) that happens to wander into Bon Bon. Of course, this is in between working on the next chapter of my growing fanfiction opus... which I really, really intend on working on this week. Honest! _________________ Johnny's Fanfics (including Sureshot! A Bon Bon Tale)
Johnny's backstory
Johnny, Mark II (Project Aten character) |
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Lidia_Apricot Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 08 Oct 2008 Posts: 3273
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 7:06 pm Post subject: |
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Sounds interesting, Mr. Six-Killer.
I'll be waiting till I get the chance to read your stories :3. |
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JohnnyPsycho Royal Member of BonBon
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Kasumi Rank: Senior Member
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 159
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:37 pm Post subject: |
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JohnnyPsycho wrote: | Well I hope you've already read chapters 1 and 2 of my main Bon Bon fanfic... I've only been advertising it under all of my forum posts for months! |
When nobody responded to my silly story (which I thought was somewhat amusing at the time), I figured that I just said too much and probably shouldn't have written. I do like to write, if only to point out my own personal shortcomings, as I think it's a kind of catharsis for me.
I normally don't read fan-fiction, so I didn't notice until you pointed it out. I really like your writing. Anybody that can integrate a jackalope into a furry story gets my vote.
I think that the problem with most fan-fiction is that people tend to adjust storylines to fit their own personal desires. For instance, most people tend to do "shipping" when they write. In other words, people tend to slowly reinvent their favorite characters in a comic and turn them into what they wish that they could be, not what they really are. As a result, the characters act very inconsistent and the work tends to become very obvious that it's fan-fiction and can't pass as story canon. But you, sir, incorporating Daisy Nugget's strip tease into your story and keeping it believable? Pure genius. |
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JohnnyPsycho Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:01 pm Post subject: |
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I don't know if it's really "genius"... it was really just based on a realization that, without having actually shown up in the main comic, Daisy's sort of a "free agent" as far as writing her character goes, so when coming up with some backstory between herself and my fursona I had a lot of room to work with... and yet, I didn't want to go so far away from the things actually happening in the story that it would divert too much from the spirit of the comic. I figured expanding upon her striptease performance would be one way to "anchor" the character to the reality of Bon Bon, the comic, and the site. I may or may not include reference to the Delight Castle Ball toward the end of the story, I haven't decided yet... _________________ Johnny's Fanfics (including Sureshot! A Bon Bon Tale)
Johnny's backstory
Johnny, Mark II (Project Aten character) |
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Posts: 1462
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 5:50 am Post subject: |
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Nothing of the sort Kasumi. If no one responded, its either they didn't go through all the new threads, aren't around enough to reply and merely read and continue on, or they're like me who don't really read most of the stories here.
Its nothing personal, but with how much time it usually takes me just to reply to the many threads that I'm already invested in, I don't really have the time to read everyone's stories. Short hand can get a response sometimes. _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 31 Jul 2008 Posts: 1578
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:58 am Post subject: |
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I'm afraid I haven't read any of the stories people have written at all. I keep telling myself I will, but I can never find the time. I hope eventually to read them all. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Tursi Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 06 Feb 2007 Posts: 648
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Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:52 pm Post subject: |
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Bit of a late reply, but like Johnny said, while my character has dated Meg when given the opportunity (mmm.. fluffy tail), there's no indication that there's any actual relationship in place.
As for writing, don't be discouraged by a lack of response. I'm another one who can't hit every thread, especially when I'm away from home like now, but now that I know it's there I have something to explicitly seek out when I've got a few extra minutes. _________________ http://harmlesslion.com |
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 4:01 pm Post subject: |
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Not to mention that half the threads in the forum that are active are all RP threads! Except for a few others, there's not too many threads to reply to except when us long lost members come by to reply to a bunch. _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 4:04 pm Post subject: |
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Yes, that is a shame, Mystic, but what can we do? Wait, you were lost? Did you ask for directions on how to get back here? _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Posts: 1462
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 4:40 pm Post subject: |
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Not at all. I've got this place bookmarked. I meant more for our members who come by maybe twice a month, like Kommy, Drake, Tursi, and a few who make even rarer appearances, like Ksthara, Herisheft, and our little private eye Stubkins. _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 13 Apr 2008 Posts: 2620
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Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:02 am Post subject: |
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I've actually been thinking of the way people pick the character they'd like their fursona to be with. Like at the ball. Seems like many members pick a partner that hasn't appeared in a scene with another royal member yet. So it does give a bit of an impression that there are many actual couples in Bon Bon, though it's not really the case as mentioned already. _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
Constance Mayflower's diary
The Mayflower Diaries |
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 12:59 pm Post subject: |
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If I'd had an avatar in time for the ball, I know who I'd have wanted to go to it with. I'm pretty sure anyone who pays any attention to what I say will know who that is, too. Though at first, I thought of Chessy, mainly because she's the only person I really knew at the time, having been introduced to Bon Bon by her. That reminds me, I haven't seen her face around here for a long time. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 13 Apr 2008 Posts: 2620
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Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 1:07 pm Post subject: |
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I don't know who I would have picked for the ball. If it's just for the dance I guess it wouldn't be that big a deal, but I won't pick anther royal member for a sex scene with my fursona. Nor do I really have any favorite among the other male characters we've seen so far. _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
Constance Mayflower's diary
The Mayflower Diaries |
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JohnnyPsycho Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 08 Jul 2006 Posts: 2311
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Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 2:34 pm Post subject: |
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Like others have stated, I've got a definite preference for Daisy Nugget, the only other coyote in Bon Bon, but I wouldn't say that my character and her are in an exclusive relationship (hell, my fursona's first appearance was a group sex scene with Violet!).
What I'm saying is, if Vanessa decides to pair off Daisy with another character in a future comic, I'm not going to throw a fit or anything like that... just silently give the other person the "evil eye".
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VkZNSRhOtco <---the "evil eye" in practice _________________ Johnny's Fanfics (including Sureshot! A Bon Bon Tale)
Johnny's backstory
Johnny, Mark II (Project Aten character) |
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 31 Jul 2008 Posts: 1578
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Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 3:10 pm Post subject: |
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Ah, Scrubs.
I don't know if Tadelesh will ever find someone to be a couple with. He's tried in the past, but relationships always seem to fail for him for some reason. He doesn't fall in love easily, but when he does, he falls hard, often too hard too fast. I hope that doesn't happen here too. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Posts: 1462
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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 1:52 pm Post subject: |
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Symphony, I think its mainly to give one another and the side characters some screen time. Its nice to see people we know in cameos, as it gives this forum a stronger sense of a community if we see one another here and there.
If I was to find a more permanent male to be placed with me, it would most likely be one of the male felines. However, since I'm not looking for anything permanent, I can play with just about any of the men. Like Johnny said, the gal he sees himself with most isn't even who he first appeared with. Its a land of debauchery, not perfect wedding couples. I mean, if I was to appear in a threesome with, lets say, Xebulon and Gantros, that doesn't mean I'm hoping my character will marry or even date them. Xebulon is a good friend who I can get my fill of bear hugs from, and Gantros is an interesting man with a camera, for those times of when the exhibitionist within me kicks in.
Now, looking back at what I used to claim about the "curse of Bon Bon" where we would only have so many royal members at once, I rethought it when hearing about when Labrn starting talking about the card game. It was when he mentioned that there aren't many "travelers" for the card game, as that's one of the types you can be, like entertainer and noble. When we have members who appear and then move on, I suppose its fitting since that's what Bon Bon is. A place for a vacation, but not a permanent residence for most. _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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henkcobra Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 28 Jan 2008 Posts: 4122
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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 2:14 pm Post subject: |
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Mystic wrote: | Symphony, I think its mainly to give one another and the side characters some screen time. Its nice to see people we know in cameos, as it gives this forum a stronger sense of a community if we see one another here and there.
If I was to find a more permanent male to be placed with me, it would most likely be one of the male felines. However, since I'm not looking for anything permanent, I can play with just about any of the men. Like Johnny said, the gal he sees himself with most isn't even who he first appeared with. Its a land of debauchery, not perfect wedding couples. I mean, if I was to appear in a threesome with, lets say, Xebulon and Gantros, that doesn't mean I'm hoping my character will marry or even date them. Xebulon is a good friend who I can get my fill of bear hugs from, and Gantros is an interesting man with a camera, for those times of when the exhibitionist within me kicks in.
Now, looking back at what I used to claim about the "curse of Bon Bon" where we would only have so many royal members at once, I rethought it when hearing about when Labrn starting talking about the card game. It was when he mentioned that there aren't many "travelers" for the card game, as that's one of the types you can be, like entertainer and noble. When we have members who appear and then move on, I suppose its fitting since that's what Bon Bon is. A place for a vacation, but not a permanent residence for most. |
Unfortantly, I will stay in bonbon. So look out because I will get you before you know it. _________________ Avatar: http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7830
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 2:20 pm Post subject: |
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I'm right there with you on that, Mystic. If I was to find a more permanent female, it would most likely be one of the female felines; but for playing around, any of the females will do.
Speaking of Royal members - I do believe tomorrow (or possibly Friday, I'll have to check which) will make me a full Royal member of 6 months' subscription. Unfortunately, I still haven't quite finished preparing my avatar, so I will still have to wait before even joining the queue for one. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 2:23 pm Post subject: |
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Well get on it man! _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 3:05 pm Post subject: |
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I've been busy with other things. Plus, I'm waiting for at least one of my commissions to come back before making a final decision - I want to see if that's how I really want him to look, or if I still need to make adjustments. I want him to be perfectly how I want him before I post it. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Posts: 1462
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Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 3:54 pm Post subject: |
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Indeed. There's people who have posted maybe 2 times since they joined who have their descriptions up over you.
Infact, I the first post is their "welcome" post, to introduce themselves. Sometimes with a simple "Hi, I'm new." Then their description in the sticky threads.
I do hope they remember part of the deal is to stay an active member in the forum, or do the other forums count towards that Ronald? Like Vixine's and the general threads far below the Bon Bon one. _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 5:17 pm Post subject: |
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Unfortunately, all three of the commissions I've ordered keep getting delayed due to overworked artists. Hopefully at least one of them will be done in the next week or two, so I can get a proper idea of how my description works and if he looks how I imagine it; then just a couple of tweaks and I should be ready to post it. I would rather wait longer and have him perfect than rush it and have him not quite how I envisioned; though, of course, Vanessa's work will make him spectacular anyway. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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LabrnMystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 3:07 pm Post subject: |
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I know that feeling. One of the first Commissions I had done of Labrn, I waited a whole year! _________________ The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last. |
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Chaosengine Rank: Super Veteran
Joined: 18 Dec 2008 Posts: 3307
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 6:12 pm Post subject: |
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I'm not actually going to put up any kind of concrete description of my character until I know that people like having me around. There's nuthin' worse than bein' the most hated man in the neighborhood and not knowin' about it... _________________ "One night in Bangkok and the world's your oyster.
The bars are temples, but the pearls ain't free...
You'll find a god in every golden cloister,
And if you're lucky then the god's a she..." |
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Drofgod969 Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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If people hated how you do things, they would tell you. Everybody hear doesn't beat around the bush. Well from my observations anyway. _________________ yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend. |
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Xebulon Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 11:10 pm Post subject: |
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Mystic wrote: | Xebulon is a good friend who I can get my fill of bear hugs from.... |
Speaking of which... *wraps up Mystic in an all encompasing, Squeeze-Em-Till-They-Squeektm bear hug for a few seconds before putting her back down*
It's not like sex is mandatory anyways, Symphony. Take Ashton for example. *puts an arm around Ashton's shoulders and pulls him over* Here we have a prime example of a young, healthy, attractive male, and yes Ashton I say that in a platonic fashion, who has no interest in partaking of the various variety of sordid social activities available. A veritible pillar of morality, he is. If you want to hold off on your equine lass receiving some stud's wild oats until a more appealing specimine comes along, or if ever at all, then don't worry over it and just let Vanessa know. _________________ I like old jokes. With them I know when to laugh. |
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Chaosengine Rank: Super Veteran
Joined: 18 Dec 2008 Posts: 3307
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 5:19 am Post subject: |
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Drofgod969 wrote: | If people hated how you do things, they would tell you. Everybody hear doesn't beat around the bush. Well from my observations anyway. |
You're prolly right, but as the Jerry Lewis to the forums Dean Martin, I need reassured every now and then... _________________ "One night in Bangkok and the world's your oyster.
The bars are temples, but the pearls ain't free...
You'll find a god in every golden cloister,
And if you're lucky then the god's a she..." |
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henkcobra Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 5:24 am Post subject: |
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Xebulon wrote: | Mystic wrote: | Xebulon is a good friend who I can get my fill of bear hugs from.... |
Speaking of which... *wraps up Mystic in an all encompasing, Squeeze-Em-Till-They-Squeektm bear hug for a few seconds before putting her back down*
It's not like sex is mandatory anyways, Symphony. Take Ashton for example. *puts an arm around Ashton's shoulders and pulls him over* Here we have a prime example of a young, healthy, attractive male, and yes Ashton I say that in a platonic fashion, who has no interest in partaking of the various variety of sordid social activities available. A veritible pillar of morality, he is. If you want to hold off on your equine lass receiving some stud's wild oats until a more appealing specimine comes along, or if ever at all, then don't worry over it and just let Vanessa know. |
If you can give a explanation about someones charater can you give some explanation of me then? _________________ Avatar: http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7830
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