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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 4:32 pm Post subject: Flashback: Discussion |
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Working on Jerin's story. Figured I'd make this thread first so i can talk to people about what they think, and plan out the story. Speaking of which I need to talk to Cassandre, Shadow_Twisted, and Kommy about something on the main plot line.
The story is here http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7757 _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:17 am Post subject: |
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Well, you just gotta get the right type of distraction to get them over here. *Holds up a sign that says "Booze and Hookers"* _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 2:28 pm Post subject: |
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I see no booze or hookers.. False advertising!
I would give you some feedback, Jerin, but unfortunately I don't read anyone's stories at the moment - too busy. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:43 pm Post subject: |
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yeah and actually while this is futher up here. Cna i ask people in general who's fursonas i have permission to use? _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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Marx-Paragon Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:59 pm Post subject: |
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Jerin Nekros wrote: | yeah and actually while this is futher up here. Cna i ask people in general who's fursonas i have permission to use? |
you're more then welcome to use mine. _________________
marx's four step guide to being popular in the fandom
1 draw boobs
2 make comics
3 cuase drama
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 5:01 pm Post subject: |
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Hmm. Where's it set? It might be that Tadelesh was never anywhere near there, so even suggesting to use him would be silly. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 5:03 pm Post subject: |
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the main story line is in bonbon about a month after his arrival. The flashbacks vary from Northwest America to Australia. _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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Tadelesh Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 5:08 pm Post subject: |
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Well, perhaps in BonBon. Tadelesh has never visited America or Australia. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 11:12 am Post subject: |
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What would you need our characters for? Just appearences, interactions, or are you thinking naughty thoughts? _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 11:33 am Post subject: |
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Mystic wrote: | What would you need our characters for? Just appearences, interactions, or are you thinking naughty thoughts? |
appearences if you'd like, interaction, if i can get it to make sense in the story. As for naughty thoughts, if i'm allowed, i've got two in mind for that, but getting it to work with the story line might prove tricky. _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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LabrnMystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:21 am Post subject: |
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I'll partake in the flashback, but I'd like to be carrying a potted plant that, as each flashback gets closer and closer to the present day, the plant I'm carrying slowly grows to a full out tree in the present time. _________________ The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last. |
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:23 am Post subject: |
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LabrnMystic wrote: | I'll partake in the flashback, but I'd like to be carrying a potted plant that, as each flashback gets closer and closer to the present day, the plant I'm carrying slowly grows to a full out tree in the present time. |
time fram for when you were in australia or San Fran? _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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LabrnMystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:03 pm Post subject: |
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*shrugs* Lets go with Australia. You know, I was actually born there. ^_^ _________________ The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last. |
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:21 pm Post subject: |
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ok any time in particular? those are going to be happening about in the past 4 years about _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 9:11 pm Post subject: |
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Hey Ewan is it okay if i use the Golden glass? and if i can what time does it open in the morning? _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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Cassandre Rank: Super Veteran
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:02 pm Post subject: |
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You have my permission to use CLR for anything, just seeing, interaction, or naughty bits. Remember though, that she has just escapedan insane asylum and is searching for hre estranged husband. speaking of which, I must edit my background.
What is it that you need to speak with me about? oh, and by the wya, if we interact, make it because you have information, and if we interact naughtily, I like to dominate. But, I can be submissive. And I'm super insane right then.
Just to let you know.
What is it you wanted to speak about? _________________ [insert witty comment] |
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 7:53 am Post subject: |
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I'll keep that in mind whe i need to get the lime build-up off my shower wall.
Anyway, idea i was thinking about. namely some "out of town" talent being hired to deal with Samuel and CLR. talen being some "old friends" of jerin as it were _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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Cassandre Rank: Super Veteran
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:03 pm Post subject: |
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mmkay, I understood virtually nothing in that statement.
And I see you've adopted the way I call her CLR. _________________ [insert witty comment] |
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Cassandre Rank: Super Veteran
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Dammit. From now on I'm callling her ClR _________________ [insert witty comment] |
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 3:41 pm Post subject: |
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yeah ok to clarify what i said, i'm thinking some bushwhackers from australia with a grudge against Jerin got hired to take out CLR and Samuel. _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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Cassandre Rank: Super Veteran
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 9:28 pm Post subject: |
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Hm. Okay. They could be friends of victims, or maybe friends of contacts that had to be killed. Once they knew too much, they wer killed.
Or, they could be relations to Pierre. Nasty, rotton, fucking, ass-hole...
Hehe, sometimes I can hate my characters sooo much I want to kill them. Which is good becuase he ends up with his blood staining the walls of his new home red. His intestines are wreathed on the door, and his penis- You don't want to know I assume. _________________ [insert witty comment] |
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 9:46 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah one of them is the brother to a guy Jerin killed, I could work out the other two as having lost relatives who were traveling. _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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Jerin Nekros Rank: Veteran
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Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:03 am Post subject: |
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ok finally getting to where i'm working on this again. should be posting another entry in a week or two depending. I've reworked the plot a little, in part due to some people disappearing, and partly because my initial idea didn't quite blend into the town right. Still looking for permissions, though i need to talk a few people about certain plot points, namely Kommy, Constance, Caroline, Samuel, and Jess. No particular rush since i shouldn't be getting to anything involving you for a bit. _________________ My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
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