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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 1:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Feingo took the blows, his anger growing with every contact, until another nerve snapped in his mind, pushing him to a whole new level. He brought his feet up firmly beneath his foes chest, and heaved with all his might, sending the bat flying across the room into a wall. Feingo brought himself to his knees, blood dripping from his nose and lip, along with the re-opened wound on his shoulder. His eyes momentarily shot to his soldier, (Saphron).

"Corporal!! Get that pouch!! He the enemy seems intimidated by it! We'll make them pay for what they did to us!!!" His eyes shot back to the red eyed foe. "FOR THE FALLEN BROTHERS!!!" He shouted, then lunged agai at the foe, delivering a roundhouse kick to his jaw, then grabbing him by his neck and throwing him into a pile of scrap metal head first.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 6:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dain moved Keins body to a safe area away from the commotion. Then Dain went to a wall pulled a board off of it and grabbed a 20 lbs. warhammer. this should do it. Dain thought to himself. As he walked to where Feingo and Sephron was fighting Crimson he herd a yell that stopped him dead in his tracks. "Dain help! They got her, they got her!"

A black cat yelled as she ran to him hugging his back. She was wearing knee high midnight blue leather boots, skimpy dark green leather skirt, and a dark green leather shirt. "They got her. They got her." she kept repeating in his back. Dain dropped the warhammer onto the ground and turned around.

"Who has her?" Dain asked as he hugged her back and wiping away the tears she had.

"I don't know. A bat, a wolf and some of their goons ambushed us as we were walking down the path you used to get hear." She said as she stated to calm down then noticed the commotion behind Dain.

"Wha." Was all she could say before Dain interrupted her.

"Try and stop them. They don't know you and maybe that will bring there sinces back to them." Dain said as he walked to the door with his cane, coat and hat on. "There names are Crimson, Sephron, and Feingo." That was all he said before he left to meat the real people they should be fighting.

(i planed on bringing these two in later but i really had no idea what to do so i brung them in a little early. don't worry i will introduce later.)
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 9:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*stopping slightly to grab the pouch saphron(zarcona) see's the exchange between dain and the newcomer.* "stay back, if we can get him tied up and force this down his throught i think he might go back to normal." *he smiles* "then again.........."
*he dashes to the two brawling cretures on the ground, and with a mighty heave, lifts them both up and slams them into a wall. taking his hand he side chops feingos head to daze him slightly and then grabs crimsons neck with the same hand, while his other struggles to open the pouch.* "commander! grab his wings, we need to keep him grounded!"
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(*hear over a loud speaker* Feingo Ferinton you are being paged on "a new scent in town."Feingo Ferinton "a new scent in town.")
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Crimson struggled to get free but the grip of both Feingo and Saphron overwhelmed him. Crimson trashed around landing random blows as they tried to force what looked like a pill into his mouth. Crimson forcibly swallowed the pill and with seconds his crimson eyes returned to normal. The contents to the pouch have successfully pulled Crimson out of his frenzy but his body acted negatively toward the pill, sending his body into wild spasms. Once the spasms stopped Crimson's body was limp and unresponsive. Crimson was out cold for the time being.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 10:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*finger twitches*
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((an aside to revan: do you know what it is i put on you? if not read http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=5853&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=320.))


*seeing crimson body go slack and cam faced saphron(zarcona) eyes start to turn back to their normel redish hue. noticing revans movement he then heads towards the still reviving doctor.* "commander ferington, help me over here, we need to stop this mans bleeding. hurry and we may yet save him."
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Feingo was still in his flashback, the bodies of his men still surrounding him. His breathing was heavy, and the carnage around him was hard to bear. But at least he had managed to kill one of the Dahomians responsible. Or so he thought.

Then came the voice of his lone Coporal, calling for his aid from the other side of the field. He left the dahomians body and rushed over to where he was. If one of his soldiers was still alive, it was his responsability to try and save him. But, when he got to where the Coporal was, he found he was knealt by.... Thurrell!

He got down by his friends body. "Coporal, get me a cloth, stat!" He brought hios hand to the wound on his friends chest, applying bare-hannded pressure to the wound. "Come on Thurrel! You're gonna make it through this. Stay with me Thurrell."
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Crimson flopped on the ground as the wolf tossed him aside, his body cold and unresponsive. There he laid unmoving and dead-like.


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Reginald was tending to his wounds when his door opened. there stepped in the cloak figure that had give Feingo the brown pouch. "There I have done what you've asked, now let my sister go!" She demanded removing the hook the revival a female vixen barely in her fifteenth summer. Reginald turned around to face her with a joyful smile. "It is done then? He's dead? You've seen it?" The female fox nodded with tears in her eyes. "You have done your end of the bargain, now it is time that I uphold mine." He snapped his fingers and a door to there right opened and out came a very frantic, scared little female fox. The two vixens braced each other and sobbed frantically. "Now go your usefulness is now over." Reginald said and beckoned them to leave. They did so with out hesitation. "Now that savage is dealt with, we can look to removing the officer." Reginald said as the wolf from the ally stepped into the room. "This alliance will only get us so far Reginald." Velacruz said. "True but now that the biggest treat is gone we only have to worry about that deluded officer and his companions." Reginald said completely confident.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dain was running threw the woods almost as fast as he could. Her trail was easy for him to fallow back to where they was ambushed. When he got there Dain let out a terrifying yell. From there the trail was a little bit harder to fallow but he stayed on track. If they heart just one peace of fur on her they will pay. They are already going to pay for ambushing them, kidnapping her, and scaring both of them almost to death. Dain kept running fallowing the trail.

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After the fight with Crimson succeeded and Feingo and Sephron was by Kein the black cat walked over to Crimson. She stood over him and said to her self, what kind of medicine was that? She bent over and checked his pulse. He is freezing! Why is he so cold and nonresponsive? She started to look worried about him. "Hey Mr.Saphron you might want to come over hear and bring a blanket." She said in a wherry voice.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 3:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*handing feingo a sheaf of cloth for the wound, he turns to look at the young feline that had appeared within the midst of the battle.* "what is it?" *he looks at crimsons body and he sees a slight tremmoring in the body.* "what the?" *getting up, he walks over to crimson's limp body and lays his hands on his chest. he feels a very faint pulse go through the chest and getting weaker. *

taking one of his hands saphron nips a small cut into one of crimsons fingers and tastes the blod coming out. he suddenly spits out the blood and coughs.*
"damn them! that was no medicine, they tricked us into poisoning him!" *getting up, his eyes swirling again, he goes to keins body and picks up the now bloody necklace that feingo had brushed aside.* "commander i have another soldier that needs my attention can you handle this?" *he indicates keins body. feingo gives a small nod, and returns his focus on saving his companion.*

*walking back to crimson he lays the neclace around his nek and takes a steadyiing breath. he then turns to the black feline.* "mam, if you would, please, go to the wolf over there and offer your help, and whatever you do, do not look over here, no matter what you hear."
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Ok." She said calmly. As she walked to Feingo she asked," What can i do to help?"
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 2:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*turning back to crimson he leans down and softly says in his ear* "crimson, its saphron. listen what i'm about to do will hurt......a lot. the poison inside of you is slowly freezing your blod and we have to get it out. my necklace will protect you from any further or lasting harm but we must flush out the poison. if you can understand me nod once."
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 2:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(I'll make my post after Feingo)
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 5:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((okay))
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((okay))
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(waiting on Feingo or EmperorRevan)
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 2:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Feingo looked up from his fallen brother, seeing the female field nurse comming his way. He wasn't sure how she was keeping her composure in a field of dead soldiers, but it was only because he didn't realize that he wasn't in the field. That part of his life was long past, and he was now living a flashback. Only this time.... he could save Thurrell. He had to.

As his hand put pressure on Thurrells wound, he fealt as air bubbled in the blood, escaping from inside. He knew what had to be done. His eyes, blacker than the darkest night, shot up to the nurse. "Ma'am, this soldier has a pierced lung. I need to cut into him and stitch the puncture or he won't survive. I need clean cloth, lots of it, along with alcohol and the tin that is the left pocket of my uniforn. I'm also going to need a sharp blade. Hurry!"
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Crimson was unresponsive to Saphron's calls. The drug had dug to deep into his bloodstream. Crimson was in the worst fight of his life. Only his endurance can save him now.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*shallow breaths escape Kein's mouth, the looming feel of death, grasping at his throat, his mind swimming with the horrified images, of the countless deaths he has wrought with his ideas*

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH," Kein bellows, as Feingo, uses a fire to cartalize the wound he inflicted upon himself, the necklace having some healing effect on him, as the damaged organs heal at an accelerated rate.

*Kein falls back to the floor, his breathing stabalizing, and Feingo, rushing to the aid of Saphron, who points to the door, giving Feingo furthar orders, that Kein could not make out, before his eyes closed, and mind wondered into thought*
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

She wiped the sweat off Kein's forehead with a cloth full of water that Feingo told her to get. The only one that is in any condition to fight is that tiger over there, Saphron if i remember correctly. Hurry up over there. I just hope he can get to Dain before he attacks those guys before i can get him to help. "Saphron, let me know the moment you are done." She yelled, to make sure he herd her. "I wont you to go and help Dain when you are done."

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Dain was almost at a cabin he spotted a little further out when his mind started to play tricks on him.

"So you think you will save her like how you saved her from me?" A voice from the shadows asked.

"You!" Dain exclaimed as a figure stood out from the shadows. "You are dead. Leave me alone!" Dain exclaimed at the figure.

"Yes i am dead but your mind keeps me alive in your head." The figure said in a sinister way. "Your anger blinds you and keeps me alive..."

"Ok then lets get rid of you then." Dain said as he sat down and started to meditate. The figure quickly receded to the shadows. Then it hit Dain like a brick. I was just about to make a big mistake just jumping in with out checking the area or numbers of the enemy. Dain started to check the area around the cabin.
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*his mind barelyt registering what the feline had said was focused on his grusome task. slowly removing a small dagger from his shirt, he takes the blade and slices into his fore armm, squezing his hand to get the blod to flow. then he turned the knife onto crimson slicing his forarm in the same manner and setting it at a lower level so as to draw the blood out of him.* 'careful saph, a wrong move or split pause could send this whole thing down the shit hole' *then setting aside the knife he takes crimsons head and lifts it upso as to add elevation. as saphron watches the blood leave crimsons body he starts to feel his heart rate slowdown.* 'good, almost time.' carefully grabbing crimosns fore arm he squeezes slowly, ristricting the flow of blood. once the floww was a slow trickle, he lays the hert gem on the cut and the flow stops as the wound is healed.* 'okay, now for the hard part.'
*hopeing that he got most of the poison out of his system, saphron brings his still bleeding fore arm to his mouth and starts to fill his mouth with it. then leaning down, he bites into crimsons neck and pushes the fresh blood into his body.*

*crimsons body jerks as it recieves the blood, and saphron has to stop the flow for a few seconds so that criomsons body can adjust. once he calms down enough, saphron continues the transfusion, drawing his own blood four more time before he sets the jewel on the neck wound to heal it.*
'ok, that should do it, he'll be out for a while, but he should be fine now.' laying crimson back down, he stands up. a new color swirling in his eyes, and a danger that comes with them. the smell of blood was getting to him, and he had to leave. walking over to the feline. he leans down and lays a hand on her shoulder.* "he'll be fine, now tell me where Dain went."
*she turns to look at him and gasps as she sees the look in his face. she looked shaky, and saph wasn't sure she would answer.*
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 6:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Fallow the path he made." She said with a little bit of shaking in her voice. then pointed out the door to a bunch of bushes that were broken.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 9:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(skip my turn having a little writers block lol Very Happy )
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Sickling searing and sizzling rose from where Feingo worked, using a iron rod, the tip white hot brough to him by the "field nurse" to cartalize the wound, having literally sown the hole in Thurrells lung to hold it together. As he closed off the last of the open wound, something happened as the scent of the burning flesh rose to his snout. Something that had fallen loose in his brain clicked back into place, and he started to fall out of his hallucination. His head began spinning, unable to concentrate on anything. His surroundings began to change before his very eyes as he stared blankly out into space. The bloody field began to dissapear. The field nurse changed to just an ordinary girl, and the image of Thurrel changed, just as Kein shot awake with a loud shout. He burried his head in his hands, shouting, almost as if he were in pain, his teeth clenched in a painful snarl....

And then... it was over. Feingo fell silent, and slowly raised his face from his hands. His eyes, once again, shined golden, and confused, oblivious to anything that had happened. He stared down at his hands, noting they were covered in blood, then looked past him to Keins limp body, a freshly repaired wound still bloody on his chest. Had... he done that? Had he fixed Kein? He eyes began to shoot around, taking in his surroundings. Who was this girl who stood across from him? Why was his uniform off.. "W.. What happened?"
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"Huh?" She said puzzled. "You just patched him up... You were also calling me 'field nurse'. Don't you remember any of it?" She asked. "It just happened."

"No." Feingo said. Then he started to get a good look at the girl.She was a black cat that stood around 5 foot 6 inches. She was wearing knee high midnight blue leather boots, skimpy dark green leather skirt,a dark green leather shirt, and midnight blue leather gloves. She had dark teal hear that came to her shoulders. She had dark green eyes. Feingo was about to ask what her name was and other questions when he felt light headed. Then he noticed that he was bleeding from one of his previous wounds. "Dang!" he exclaimed.

"Come on, now it is your turn to get fixed up." She said.

(i hope i got your char reactions right Feingo Confused )
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The transfusion was successful but took a toll on Crimson. He laid on the floor broken and out cold.


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"My lord, the others have left the forge." the servant said. She was a tall kangaroo with brown fur and jade green eyes. "Good now id the time to act against the officer." Reginald said putting on his coat. "Sending those two after the girl in that cabin was a good trick. I have some merc's waiting for them when they get there." Velcruiz said with a grin. The two left their safe haven to assault the forge in secret.
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*having been pointed in the right dirrection, saphron starts after kein, seeming almost to glide across the floor of the forge.* 'great, this'll probably be the second time i had to cover his ass for someone else.' *saphron shakes his head in frustration, and the color in his eyes swirl faster.* 'damnit dain....' *saphron starts to sprint to try to cover more ground, keeping to dains path*
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Kein stirred, hearing the voices of Saphron giving the black female cat, instructions on sewing up Feingo's shoulder, as Saphron himself was tending to a helpless Crimson. Keins eyes closed, as he layed back in his previous condition, blood drying on his clothes. "Damnit.......I'm still here," he cursed in his mind. "I can't even die the way I want.....is the entire world against my every want and desire?" he kept thinking.

Just then a large explosion came from outside......nearly two miles away. It shook the ground, birds flocked high into the air, as a slight slimmer of smoke could be seen. "Dain," his mind thought....noticing he was not among them, and then he knew....he knew that Valucruz must have found them.....it was his signiture......dynomite.

Everyone in the room had their full attention on the blast. "Oh no," Kein could here Saphron saying, his eyes back to normal, as he finished checking Crimson, seeing the fuit bat out cold, but doing better. "I'LL KILL HIM..." Feingo yelled, rushing out, shirt undone, and bandages, a dyed a bit red from his recently sealed wounds.

"SAPHRON NOO.....you aren't well enough," Kein observed, eyes squinting, and ear perked towards their direction, as he saw the two darting to the smoke. "I'll be back....," Saphron called to the black feline, "Make sure the two are all right....I've done all I can. I entrust Crimson and Kein to you," before the girl could speak back, from Kein's perspective, Feingo and Saphron where gone.

"Ohhhh.....what do I do?" the girl exclaimed to herself, as she checked Crimson. Minutes passed, and every moment Kein, for some reason, felt a little better. The he saw it.....the amulet that Saphron was wearing, it shimmered as Crimson lay, still highly ill, it was effecting Kein too, and then an idea came to him. "This is my chance."

With her back turned away from the laying Kein, the black female cat, never new what hit her, as with hankerchied, and a bit of a solution Kein had silently picked up from the floor, covered her face, and she fell limply to the ground. "Sorry for this.....but I need to get out of here," with that said, Kein, with a little bit of pain, reached down to the unconsciess Crimson, and picked up the amulet around his neck, and placed it over his own. "Now....to get to my shop," Kein said as he exited the hut, and with a bit of difficulty made it back to Bon Bon, relatively un noticed. He slipped into his watch shop, via back door, and went to his room, where he gazed at a scar where he knew just hours ago, had pierced his side. He held the necklace in his hand, his shirt and vest thrown to a corner, and his pants muddy, hung low to the ground, and ruined shoes, and matted hair. "You......are now my new friend," Kein smiled, as he composed himself in a quick shower, slapping on some better shoes, black pants, white buttoned shirt, and red vest, and tying his black hair back.

Kein, now looking like he did evey day, went to his back storage room, and approached a broken clock, it's hour hand clearly in disuse. "I told my self I would never touch this thing," he wispered, and turning the hour hand till it reached 10, the sparrow coo-coo bird popped out, and Kein grasped it before it could go back in, and opening it's beak pulled out a tightly folded peaces of paper. Kein then rushed through his shop, grabbing money from everything, his vault, cashiers counter, and even the stash under a loose floor board. "Gotta get out of Bon Bon......not safe anymore," and with that, he slipped out, and heading towards the train station, bought passage, as he held his head low, so no one could see him, and soon later sat in a booth, in the corner. A briefcase he brought along with various passports, money from other countries, and most of all, plans to the plutonium apperatus. The most deadly weapon he, or the planet, had ever made.

(Sorry it was a bit long. I had this idea for about a week, and though "HELL THIS IS GOOD Smile ) and would add a whole new array of plots, twists, and maybe new people to join, here on the sight. I know SOME of you other Royal Members...MUST...be wanting to get into this....by all means...join in now...it's perfect, especially the Ladies....we could use some of ya, since all we guys have to work with are descriptions, and make believe...BLEH LOL. Well as stated before, sorry it was long, but I hope you guys enjoy this....I sure as hell did LOL) CIAO

P.S. this IS mine...don't steal it. http://yiffstar.com/?pid=61331

This is Kein (vampire form) though use your imagination to make him look 1895ish and mortal, andwithout the fangs. It's not hard.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 9:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((it is good, just one thing though man, if you look back at my previous posts, not only was i allready gone, but i still had my necklace after i did crimsons transfusion. needs it for this next bit you see.......here,

saphronhttp://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=5853&start=700

so you see there are a few holes in your part. but i can deal. Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil ))

*as kein sits and waits in his booth, he hears a knock on the door.* "who's there?" *he asks and opens the door, but no one is there. he sits back down slightly bewildered and leans back. suddenly laughter is heard right next to him. 'you fool......did you really think you could take me and all will be well? ha! you have no idea what you hold!'
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