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[Drofgod969]

This is Deul'Dain's history part 1.

*Well, now since i have finaly settled down in this fordge i found in the mountains not far
off from Bonbon, i might as well read my past over*. A White Mustang with silver hair around
6' 5" tall, with a mucluler build, stood up from a simple woulden stool he made not to long
ago. He was whering a pair of brown leather boots, blue whoole pants, white whoole full sleave
shirt, and a brown lether aprein with brown lerther gloves. *I cant read to long i gata get
started on the forge work i needed to do... with that in mind he walked to a woulden door he
baerly fit into from the portch. The room had a large stone slab with a anvile on top if it
in the midle of the room. There is a fernace off to the right of the anvile. there was a
workbench on the left side of the anvile, with iteams and treankets for small iteams and
jewlry. all the walls where bear excepte for a window to the far wall, a bookshelf over the
workbench, and a door on the same wall, on the far end of the workbench. He walks over to the
workbench and looks at the bookshelf.*Lets see, a few fanticy books... nope, a few books on
fordging and jewlry crafting... nope, a couple of romances.. nope, (some from random writers,
but most was made by Daphne Mallow wich he blushes when he sees them.) *come on where is it...
aha! there it is*. He grabs a old faded brown leather book.* finaly my old childhood jernal...
Lets start at the begining this time... he opeans the frunt cover and begins reading...

Hi my name is Deul'Dain Stronghoof. (Dain for short) I am a white mustang. (my dad is red,
and my mom is brown, we realy dont know what happend) I have blue eyes, around 3' 8" tall.
I have silver hair and wegh arond 80 lbs. Also i am 8 years old. I started this jernal
becose i sall a couple of them in my dad's library and thout it would be fun! My dad's
name is Dewern Stronghoof (it would have been Brooks if my dad's mom had not remarried right
before my dad was born, I still dont know how that works still...) My mom's name is Klemptra
Stronghoof. I dont know how thay met, but i know it was one of those luvyduvy scense (yuck!)
I have two brother older than me. thay are 20 years old, thay are twins, there names are
Delter and Deltor. thay have a difrent mom than i do. i also have two sisters one older than
me the other is younger than me. The older one is named Rasolen, and the other is named
Shelana. (she is a red mustang, and very tempermentle). well that is all for this page
hopfuly i will keep a intrist. let me tell you a secrit, i hate writing!

*skips a page*

i am going to make this one short. it looks like we are moving to china today. dad gave no
warning about it. me and my sisters complaind but it did little. my mom and brothers
understood the moment he said it and went to go pack. well better go befor i get yelled at.

*skips over a cople of pages full of little stuff*

The house we moved into was huge. i could go play hide and seek and look all day and never
find anny one. as soon as you step outside throo the back door.i almost got lost the 1st time
i went in there.

By now i bet you are wondering why i dont put the dates at the top of my pages, to tell you
the truth i cant keep track of the date... annywhay i found this werid building in the woods
today. i could hear people yelling "YA! WHOA! HITCHYA!" among other weard sounds. I could also
hear metal hitting metal... i gatta see what is in there. tomarow i will go and scout the
place out maybe there is a box i could climb or sumthing...

Today i had to sneek out becose i was late getting home yesterday. i found the building agean
today. when i got to it i noticed it was a wall not a building itself. i whent all the way around
the wall and sall no opening annywhere. i spent all day looking for a crack, a hole let alone a
door. i know there has to be a door... the next time i go there i will find a way to see what is
in there.

Looks like it might be a while before i can go back. becose of sneaking out yesterday i got into
big truble with mom... *skips the rest of the page*

*skips some more pages*

Today i was finaly able to go outside without having to be watched. man it was boring... annywho
i went back to the wall and noticed a tree fell over and is leanig on the wall, i thout i was
going to find out who or what was making those weird noises. as i climbed the fallen tree to the
top of the wall i sall that the ground of most of the place was sand, with weird cerculer motions
in it wich was i belive to be made with a racke. i also sall three buildings one was right below
me, one was on the opset wall, and the last was in the dead center of the wall. (it was verry
small.) i was able to climb onto the roof and was able to get back onto the tree no proble.
i sat there most of the day and saw nothing. that is when i realized there was two very big doors
that almost came to the top of the wall, at the wall to the right of me. but when i got there
on the outside there was no door. something fishy going on here... well after that i decided to
head home. maybe tomarow i will see what was making the noises. oh ya i almost frogot the walls had
sumkind of weard flower in it. it was yellow but i have only seen two flowers yellow. (diasy and
sunflower)

Wow what i sall today was incredible. when i got there thay were making those noises agean.
when i went to the tree i noticed it was difrent somehow i cant put my finger on it. but i decided
to shrug it off. when i got to the roof i sall menny people standing in lines. 10 in a row and 5
rows. thay all had on this strang yellow outfits. thay had on full sleved shirts (wich looked like
thay were tied at the ends near the wrist),little on the puffy side pants ( thay were also tied at
the end near there ankles, their shoes were simple slipons. also thay had what looked like a scarf
around their stumicks as if it was a belt... there was this one however that stood infrunt of these
rows, it was an old beaver. he was light brown with some white spots here and there, he had a long
thin mustash and beard thay were white. he had on what looked like a duble slited dress with the same
kind of pants on below it but thay were blue.

*i never knew that thay knew i was there... after a while thay sterted to leave me rice balls. after
that i knew. i wached them train and train till one day if figuerd i might as well do the same.
on the roof i did what thay did, but with less force so i didnt fall throo. i kept repeating what thay
did for a while till one day the tree i kept climing desided to break. lucky i wasnt far up it. the
next day when i got there, i sall a ladder placed there. i decided to go up it becose i thout thay
enjoyed my company. after about three days thay began to leave the ladder on the ground, i rememberd
a saying my dad told me "put stuff back where you found it" so i did. one day and only one day i frogot
to put it bask the next day the ladder was no where to be found, so i went home early that day...
the next day it was there, aprently it was punishment for not putting it back. shortly after i started
to memerize the movements my family noticed that i was acting wearder, staying out all day, coming
back so tierd, sharper reflexis... thay began to grow suspitions.*

*well since i am remembering what ocerd i might as well put the book up... na i will keep it for if i
froget annything. well annywho. my dad decided to start a gem colection with me when i was 12. we got
all kinds of jems. At the time i didnt care if thay were expensof or cheap i had the ones i liked, he
kept the others safly hidden. so i desided to do the same, i looked all over for a place, inside and
outside. till i found a stone that was loose with small crevis in it near the middle of it. i desided
it was a good spot. me and dad would trade jems go out and get more, aperently every sunday the monks
(when i finaly lernd what to call them) took that day off becose of it being somthing speritchurl...*

*me and my dad have been colecting gems for about 2 years, (i was 14) When a friend of my dads came
over. He was the local blacksmith from the town not to far away. I never got a good look at him that
day. all i could tell was that he was on the plump side and had a deap voice. i found out later what
he looked loked but that is later on.* BANG! hearing that he fell out of his seat and hit his back
a little hard on the floor. "ow, what tha heck?" out of insteanked he had grabed his cain without relising
it untill the shock of the gunfire wore off. "man for a silent town it sure is loud sometimes..."
"woops better put you back before i do something i would regret, even though there is no one there."
he put the cain back where it belonged at a nook between the bedroom door and the workbench. *hmm well
look how late it is...* the sun had set along time ago and the moon was out and it was smiling just as
happy and carefree as it could be. *well i might as well not do annything tonight, annyway i think this
is going to knot over.* he sarts rubbing his right shoulder.

after determining that the knot was going to be a nuesense insted of one of those 'cant move my arm'
knots. he went to go pick up his old journal, that he flung on the other side of the anvil. then he
went to the stool and picked it up, putting it back on all four legs. *lets see where was i? oh ya now
i remember. After he left i asked "Dad, who was that?" all he said was "A friend of mine, he is the
blacksmith in the next town over." i asked puzzled, "whats a blacksmith?" man i think that was the only
time i sall him become white as a ghost. "you have never heard of a blacksmith?" he exclamed more shocked
than anny thing else. with the shock out of his sistem he started to tell me what a blacksmith is, what
he dose, how he terns metal blocks into wonderus peases of art, every day tools and iteams, and even
instroments of war. all the while i was phlabergasted at what he was telling me, and imagining how it
would be if i wher to become a blacksmith. the next day i asked him if he could get me some books on
blacksmithing. all he did was smile.*

*after a while i started to read the books on blacksmithing while i was on the roof of the monostary.
my dad got me all kinds of books, on the histery of blacksmithing, people docuements on how thay do thair
profetion and unique there iteams, opon a couple of other books.*

*then came the day i got the letter i was not expecting i was 17.* he grabs a envalope and but it on the
other page. *i think i will read this day.*

today started as every other day, i went to the monostary but decided to end a little early. mom is getting
a little tired of me being out all day. but when i got back i sall peace of the mail on the table. puzzled i
yelled "whose mail on the table?" i heard dad yell "its for you!" i was astonished i never got mail. i
replide "anny idea who its from?" all he said was "ya a friend of mine you might like." after hearing
those words i tore opean the onvalope. and i started to read it.

he place the jornal on the workbench beside a couple of tools he left out so ho could try and make some
jewlry. and grabed the envolope that was under his right hand and started to reread the old peace of paper.

Dear Deul'Dain

i heard from some one that you show a grate intrest in becoming a blacksmith. as it turns out i need a
aprintis. well what do you say? if so i will have a cart at your house on your 18 birthday. dont werry
i have a bird that will tell me your anser.

sinsearly, a humble blacksmith.

*my dad and mom walked in when i got done reading the mail i got. "so what did he want?" my dad asked. i
was so breathless all i could say was, "he want me to become his aprintice at his fordge." after i said that
my dad asked, "so whats your replie?" i knew what my mom was going to do when i anserd him. "i will do it!"
as soon as i said that my moms eyes started to tear. she made some exquse to leve the room. "you know you
are going to have to talk with her here soon." my dad said calmy. i responded with," i know, and i will."
for the next couple of weeks my mom avoided my, and i knew why. when it was the day before my birthday i was
fianly able to talk to my mom*. a tear started to make its way down his left cheak. he whiped it away with
his sleave. *aparently i need to calmdown some, man, i think i will leave that talk for another time*. he
puts the peace of paper back in the onvilope and puts it back in the journal. *well the final entry to this
jouranl, and about time i gatta get some sleep*. he turns the page to the final entry...

well tomarrow i set off to become a aprintice blacksmith. i finaly got to talk to mom after all this time.
she finaly understand this is what i wanna do. this will be my last entry in this journal. the reson i know
is becose while i sleep tonight i know my mom will steal it. yes mom i am talking to you. well see ya i
am going to bed now. love ya mom.

as he read the last sintice his mind was full of what he and his family did together. *as thor as my
witness... * he began to ponder. *well time for bed.* then he stood up and put the journal away. he went to
the front door and shut it, also locking it. he grabed the candle and started to the other door. as he opend
it he sall his stuff laying there as it was this morning. the room was smaller than the fordge, but not by
much. there was only one window, but it was on the opasit side wall. the rest of the walls were bear.
exept for a bed that was to his left, a chest on the opasit side of the bed, a whoredrobe in the middle of
the wall to his left and a dresser right infrunt of him. *well might as well get ready for bed*. he took off
his shoes, gloves, and apren. and lade them on the dresser. *ok time for bed* he sat on the bed and laid
down. and he dreamed of his family.

(sorry about the spelling and grammer.)
well what do you think?
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yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend.

[sexymanz]

Sorry im late guys ^.^
I got knocked out by one of thoes freakin faries...
Ok but being a bouncer wouldnt be a bad idea... actually i really like the idea of going shirtless... (It will make it easier for an artist to draw me right?)
It seems like me and stuff, like something i would do lol...
anyway i thought of my build... Its just like mine... Not much visible but inner strength is great... You would be suprised to see how strong i am...
So no MASSIVE BULGING muscles but a lot of inner stregnth... (Does that make sense)
The legs are like the same... nothing is Missive or Bulging or anything...
(The Amazing Inner Stregnth comes from Years and Years of being teased and mad, thus making my inner body super powered to kill or over power someone... Real life ability too) anyway the basics are starting to come together... And yes EmperorRevan you can help also...
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[Drofgod969]

glad to see it all coming to gether i would say more gut i gatta go. (school calls)
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yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend.

[sexymanz]

same here... school does too... untill 3-4 or so... thank god for morning classes... leaves me time for parties... ^.^
But someone needs to tell thoes Faries to stop hitting me with freakin loud honking...
Honestly whenever i see one i think its Link from The Legend Of Zelda... because he travels with a fariy... but not usually 2 that are THAT bright or comming at me THAT fast...
freaking faries...
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I guess im not really going to be a member anytime soon... so please members of BonBon... please help me out with my character discriptions so that way maybe one day a artist here can put a pic of my character on a forum... i would love to see that happen one day... (anyone please?)

[EmperorRevan]

What do you mean by faires. I don't quite follow. Are ppl harrassing you at college or something? If so tell them straight up that (1) this is college and they need to grow up and act theri age, (2) if they don't stop you'll report them to the counciler. (I'd even go so far to tell them that you have like some sort of medical depression, and that you've been trying for years to get over it, but their hazing isn't helping) <== a lie of course, but an effective one. the school doesn't have any authority to check your medical history, just your word. and last (3) tell them flat out how you feel, best while other people are around, make up lies how you've been treated all your life, even say you're an orphan and where abused in foster homes, this gets them every time, they will feel VERY bad. (Sorry for anyone who is reading this and is or where in this situation. I for one no what it's like to be abused physically and mentally). I have noclue if I've hit this on the mark, or I'm sooo far off it's in another dimesion, reply with your thoughts.

P.S. I'll start the personality web plot, when i'm more awake, and will also have a "Victorian" description of your red-black wolf. he'll be dressed though, hope you don't mind
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[Drofgod969]

his "faries" are car lights...

i think i know a profetion for his guy. he could be a ranger becose he got into a lot of truble. (his party adiction.) so he has to liv in the woods alot to hide from people trying to get him.
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yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend.

[sexymanz]

and im not a nature boy...
one day i freaking cried cuz i had to spend a nite outside in the dogs house... i mean it was fun, its sorta cozy but the bugs really pissed me off.. they kept flying into my ear... that really gets annyoing after a bit.
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I guess im not really going to be a member anytime soon... so please members of BonBon... please help me out with my character discriptions so that way maybe one day a artist here can put a pic of my character on a forum... i would love to see that happen one day... (anyone please?)

[EmperorRevan]

Ah now I get it, sorry just never heard the term faires before. As you can tell I don't party much. But hell if I can beat someone in drinking straight taquilla, I don't even get buzzed man, now Crown Royal XR, aged 20 years, WHOA watch out. Anyway while waiting for class to start I got the initial overdraft of a character I think you'll like for yourself, it's very descriptive. You'll be surprised what I can think of in 25 minutes. Her it goes. Comment on anything you don't like, want to change, or do, seriously I won't be offended. Only my family can do that, everything else is childs play.

Name: Victor Menz

Age: 19

Hometown:Denver, Colorado

Species: Male fox with black and red fur

Occupation: Gold Prospector Mainly. But prospects for other valuable minerals too, such as silver and emeralds.

Description: Stands 5' 11". Body is completely black, with the exception that his ear tips are red, tail tip red, finger tips red, and has red under his golden eyes. He has short matty red hair most of the time when he's out mining, and when mining is occuring, He wears thick brown leather boots, and brown(or Blue) trouser with clasps. He carries with him a lantern, a cage with a canery in it, a black belt with various hammers, and picks on them to help him loosen up whatever he finds in his mines. On his right ear he has an earring that is made from the first gold nugget that he ever found. It is very sentimental to him, and on it are tiny emeralds going around it. When not out in the woods prospectin or mining, he is usually in Bon Bon, dressed accordingly in a light black coat, red vest with gold buttons, and light black pants, neatly ironed. And his shoes are shiny black leather in the front and back, but red like his fur in the middle. While dressed he still wears his earring, but also sports a ring on his finger, a going away present from his mother, and he also carries a silver watch, neatly placed on his vest.

History: Victor was the only child of his mother(A black vixen) and father(A red and white fox male). He inherited both of their main color attributes, but not the white fur from his father. His parents where originally from Germany, but when gold was heard to be in America, they rushed over to Colorado (Denver city) at the time, and proceeded to buy some land and get to work. Victor was only 5 at the time. His father had begun to teach Victor, an eager pup always looking up to his father, to sift throw muddy water and dirt for gold dust and nuggets. Eventually Victor began getting better than his dad, and eventually when he was 17 struck a major vein, under their home. Instantly Victor became a millionaire, but not really caring about money, only the pride of finding things valuable with his own two hands, he gave most of it to his parents, who in turned lived a comfortable life for the rest of their lives, doing communtity work for Denver City, helping it grow into the Denver we know today. Victor taking a small portion of the money, opened up a small prospecting firm, consisting of about 30 people. He left the financial affairs to people with better understanding of it's working, while he traveled the world, looking for other riches that where hinted to exist. He became very successful at this endevor, and while he finds silver, diamonds, and emeralds alright, he had a 6th sense on gold, and can find it like a scent.

He has now arrived in Bon Bon, beginning to propspect on another assignment. He currently lives in the mountain overlooking the town, living in a cozy cabin, that he made with help from some contractors and carpenters, after buying a good amount of acres from the town and with their permission. At present, he is looking for emeralds, and so has a mine, about a fourth of a mile from his home, well hidden, and his initial findings seem promising, as he has just found an emerald the size of an eye. When not covered in mud, dirt, and rock dust, he spends his free time mingling with the men and women of Bon Bon, and even though he will sometimes act a little rude because of a lack of some manners, people will disreguard it because of his "Golden Heart" (Pun intended LOL) he is a capable gambler, perfers Texas Holdem, and since he is finding precious jewels, is in no short supply of money. He loves to dance to Irish folk music, something he has only recently discovered, but if the need arises he can slow dance, if not a bit clumsily. He also likes to take pleasure in the ladies of delight castle, his favorite (You decide I'll edit it) but enjoys the company, if not minatatwa with them as well. (Sorry if I spelled that "M" word wrong). He is a young, viralant male, who is just learning to become a man.

Well I hope you like it, remeber to post things you don't like, and I'll change them eventually. Though I must warn you that in like an hour I'll be at work till, OH 10 or 11 pm. Then I work all day Friday, Saturday, and Sunday morning, then Sunday night I HAVE to do my Photo Shop Pro X2 assgnment, which sadly I couldn't do yesterday, because the goobs at my job put me on, WHILE I was in class, Guh why do I work at a crappy place? I don't know, I need another job, LOL. CHOW

P.S. to anyone reading this. This is not my fursona, it's just one that I help Sexymanz come up with, since it's hard for him to describe things, just wanted ya to know
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[Drofgod969]

man if that that one keeps (the profetion at least) Mr.Man we might become real good friends...

also what do you guys think of my avatars histery so far?
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yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend.

[EmperorRevan]

History was good, lucky for you, the guards didn't catch you looking into the forbidden city. If they did, you'd have your penis cut off, and then tortured, and then die a slow and painful death. Though I think you neglected to tell us, how you got to Bon Bon

Anyway I gotta go to work see ya later tonight, sorry guys
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[Feingo Ferinton]

Well, I suppose after E.R did such a fine job, my imput is no longer writeup is no longer needed. Good work E.R.
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[sexymanz]

MY JAW FREAKING DROPED WHEN I READ THE DESCRIPTION...
I can't be much happier than that ^^
That was so damn good... *cries just a little for real*
YOU DID IT!!! YOU... FREAKING... DID..IT!!!!
few things to change of course... (i JUst noticed, Victor manz? Well if this dosent remind me of VictorMan i dont know what... (Victor man was a game made By SEGA. It was a robot that had to clean up the world but a evil dictator robot was taking controll... so Victor man had to stop the evil robot before humans returned to earth) Still a good name though...
But can we try this name please? Vincent Hawk Moore...
This was my first name before my mom changed it to Dakota...

Red tiped fingers and red under my eye... no thx.
Hair, Spiky with red tips at the VERY TIP of each spike.
(I love the miner desc... Its really good! ((im actually good with a hammer lol)) )
ear ring from first find, brilliant!
But i rather be in a cave other then the mountians or the forest, Im a city guy that dosent like the out doors very much. (Sorry for changing something really big... but This is going to be my character whenever i become a member when i get the member ship for 6 mths.) He likes caves because they are sorta dark, not too hot or too cold, FULL of surprises, and personal favorite... bats. He has a thing for bats. (Which makes the vamp girl of BonBon my favorite. **I forgot her name Oh NOEZ!!!**) also the family... heres a really big part that i have to change im sorry. He Does Not Like His Dad One Bit... Dad hurt mom so mom kicked him out of the house and Vincent had no role model. He stumbled into a cave and found a large amount of gold, so he started to do diggings in caves... Dad is discluded from the family but he does contributes for the color of fur...
ok next is lets change the state a little... although i like the state of colorado, I love Indiana more... You hit the Part from Germany Spot on. My ansestors lived in germany before comming into the USA.
keep the 6th sense of gold and jewles...
Ok lets just say that he does not live in the mountians but more in the city ok?
I just thought of something... His weight is natural, average. Not A big kind of guy but not skinny either... Medium weight so around 180, light but strong...
Lets change the attitude of him from a little mean to loveable... Hes a natural play boy ^.^
favorite card game is Black Jack.
Ugh i hate to say this but im not a dancer... I would rather not dance then to try at all... (i cant dance worth a crap lol ^.^)
BUT!!!! Slow dancing is something that i will sorta gain at anytime from instinct... (In times i can slow dance while presented with a Very nice and sexy girl... this is only when i CAN slow dance)

OH IM SORRY I FORGOT THE AGE!!!
Age is 18... HES The newest that anyone can be... (This way i live the longest lol ^.^)

crap im so sorry... i forgot more occupations... I AM A MAJOR PARTY ANIMAL... Even though i have class, im still young so there is STILL party left in me.. (Heavy drinking and lots of good music) ((Dont forget the girls either ^.^)
Im sorry for changing the best parts of it... i really am... anyway ITS STILL AMAZING THAT YOU DID THAT FOR ME THANK YOU SO MUCH E.R!!!
thx to all of you...
let me know... hope to see if maybe there is something we can improve on...
((also i am wondering if i DESERVED something here that i would get one wish... Any Artist That Could Draw Me in their imagnation but with the descriptions still in effect would be the best birthday gift ever)) On the internet... My best so far is that freakin car i got last birthday ^.^

BUT I SUCK AT DRIVING LOL!!! I go too fast and i sorta PUNCH it reall easially... lol... anyway back to topic this is freaking great, thoes are some changes. let me nkow what you think. i may be on around 10-11 tonite... anyway thx so much ^.^
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[sexymanz]

that was my longest post so far...
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[Drofgod969]

imp that was only part one of his history.
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Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend.

[sexymanz]

you call me an imp?
lol its ok maybe but i didnt know there was more lol...
If you asked me i thought that was damn good...
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[Feingo Ferinton]

Sorry I didn't get to your profile Manz. But right now, I'm actually trying to draw the commander!

... Yeah, I know, what the hell am I doing? I'm a writer, not an artist. But I fealt I had to do it. I'm gonna try and post it 2night!
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[sexymanz]

HORRAH!!!
Well... I cant see it untill about 3-4 tomorrow... Tonite i have to go to bed early... There is going to be a MASSIVE EARLY PARTY I HAVE TO BE IN or im going to get hit by one of thoes damn faries i always see...
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I guess im not really going to be a member anytime soon... so please members of BonBon... please help me out with my character discriptions so that way maybe one day a artist here can put a pic of my character on a forum... i would love to see that happen one day... (anyone please?)

[Drofgod969]

well good luck with it. also post it when done i wanna see.
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yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend.

[Feingo Ferinton]

I'm gonna post it im Feingo's History in about 5 minutes. Stick around!!!!
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[Drofgod969]

k. i have started on part 2. but i think part 3 will be the best one thou.
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quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend.

[EmperorRevan]

Hey, read your reply, no prob, I can change this in no time flat. Just need to clarify some things. (1) sorry for using Victor Manz, I just chose Victor form my head, probably in reference that your fursona lives in the Victorian ages, and I chose Manz, after your online handle, "Sexymanz. But if you want your characters name to be Vincent Hawk Moore. Then BOOM so be it.

(2) We can easily get rid of the red finger tips,and red under/around the eyes. But as for the hair, I don't know if we can make it spikey, because that hairstyle really didn't exist at the time. Though how about long hair tied back in a bow, or wrap of some sort with a red tip? Do you think that would look good on your fursona? Tell me if you think so?

(3) I chose Denver Colorado, because history tells of a man woho found gold at a creek named Cherry Creek, and when he bot supplies he had no money, so he payed with gold dust, leading the entire world to a gold rush in what is now Denver, Colorado. I have no clue if Indiana had a gold rush, but if you search the internet to see if it does, just tell me when it happened and where. But of course we could always make up a fake gold rush, this is fiction of course.

(4) This one's simple, we can make him look 180 pounds, and strong, but not massively. Question though, I just thought this. Since he's been mining and prospecting for like 4 or 5 years, since he was like 13 or 14, should we have any scars on him? you know like wild animals attacking him, and getting caught in cave ins, or heavy rocks hitting his leg, back, or shoulders? Just a thought.

(5) I don't really understand this quote : "But i rather be in a cave other then the mountians or the forest, Im a city guy that dosent like the out doors very much". Doehis mean he lives in a cave, or that he works in a cave, and not a mine that he dug out from the earth. Most mines/caves are in a mountain, so there's no real way around this, I think, unless you know something I don't.

(6) I can easily make him not like his dad, but love his mom. Question is, do you want the dad to ever show up again? Another thing, I thought that since you said your fursona was a major party animal? If so I was under the influence that he could dance well, though I would really reconsider being a complete booze-aholic. Other people in Bon Bon might take offense to his rudness when he's drunk, and the smell of alcohol might scare the so called "Ladies" away, inhibiting you from "Getting Any" We could have him get drunk from time to time, but how about steady drinking with friends in town.

(7) Last, if you want him living in Bon Bon, and not a cave or the forest, then I think we should have him dress nicely out in public, but raggedy while he's at work. Maybe a woman can saunter up to him while he's dirty, musky, and sweaty, and have his way with her, if she feels attracted to him. Well you take this all in, reflect on it, and reply back

Note: I'm just making a decription of your character so that when the time presents itself, you can show it to Venessa, when you become a "Senior Royal Member" so that she can possibly draw an avatar out of the description. I hope all of you don't think I was going to write a series out of this, I'm SOOOO sorry if I lead you all on in thinking this. It's just that I have 3 series I'm writing for readers on Yiffstar, and taking on a 4th one would be impossible, since I have school to attend to, work, and a personal life, not to mention I'm a gamer, I just beat Star Wars: The Force Unleashed twice, on both endings, and am looking forward to Fable 2 when it arrives October 15, again I'm sorry if I lead any of you readers on, it's just that I've recently discovered I'm good at writing stories, and I'm taking a loving to it quick. P.S. I can't draw worth a shite, I'm studying to though, it'll take a while, and ALOT of practice, I hope to get just as good as the person who drew my fursona, guy named Artwolfe. He's on yiffstar and has a free online comic, VERY GOOD. Here's a link to my fursona, if you didn't get to see it last time.

http://yiffstar.com/?pid=61331
CHOW
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[JohnnyPsycho]

I just gotta ask, EmperorRevan, are you spelling "ciao" wrong on purpose, for a laugh? Just curious...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ciao
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/ciao
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[EmperorRevan]

On purpose, I never liked being conformed to societies wishes, since society pretty much screws up not only their lives, but tries to screw up mine. So I tell myself, Eh I want to do something a little different, and at first my sig was "Make Peace or War$, whatever you prefer. LOL" this is for my own amusement as to how the world is pretty mush an effed up place. But my sig for some reason had eveloved into Chow. Now I know it's spelled wrong, but I just can't find my place to correct it, my mind likes it as it is, and even if it's spelled wrong, others get the general gist of it, meaning See ya, bye. So I think I'll keep, just because it's mine and no one else on the internet does it, just Revan," CHOW LOL
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[LabrnMystic]

I got to the end of this thread, browsing through, then had to read the first page again to get back on track.

Agreed, that Drake will now have some more stallions to compete with, besides the one in his own story, though the take on feet instead of hooves will be an interesting change, if Vanessa will go through with it.

As far as other characters, a few started fantasy and de-evolved down to regulars, such as our dragon (now lizard) friend. Even Drake started off as a pegasus, but he had to lose the wings.

I also can't help but noticed that Vanessa was right in that most the male characters around here are quite large in physique.
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[Xebulon]

[Drofgod969]

i was thinking of making my avatar a little shorter but i cant find a meshering tape...
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yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend.

[LabrnMystic]

Well Xebulon, I didn't mean your roundness as much as the height. Just about all the men around here are 6' something. Quite towering over the supple and delicate flowers that fill Bon Bon.
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[Symphony]

[EmperorRevan]

I've been tall and robust all my life, and been made fun of it, because I never wanted to be in the "In" crowd. Sure I would talk to them, but I would with every one else. So when I got into the furry community, and finally decided on what my fursona would look like, I was happy that I wouldn't have to be superly muscular, or just BIG, I can look relaxed, and sophisticated. With a hint of maddness <=== (though you'll only find out by reading my story. Incomplete by the way (for now))
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[sexymanz]

Well sorry it took me a while to get back... anyway you do bring up some very good points...
(2) hair... ok i keep forgeting that this is in old times and not in the days of now. I was thinking of a shaggy look, but more like pointed ends when it ran down my head a little bit... if that makes sense.

(3) Ok i found nothing about Indiana having any gold rushes... so maybe we can make that up perhaps?

(4) Well the scars and things... Lets say that hes not the fastest runner from some knee problems... but hes capable of running for a short bit. I dont want to make the character to look like a rag doll... So im trying to make it something i always wanted to be... Perfect skin (XD)

(5)He lives in the city, works in a cave. He never stands around the forest looking around much... And he travles to BonBon's local Mt about 4 miles away...

(6) Hate his dad never to be seen again, loves his mom... I am a party animal but i know my limits... So i guess maybe i can take it down from Hard partier to classy partier... (well ok maybe not that much class but its not too wild or too boring)

(7)Ok we can have a lady to help shaunter him up whenever he come back from his 8 hour shift... And this lady likes Vincent Hawk very much... Hes know her ever sense she appeared on his door step a few years ago when she was chased by an angry mob for stealing a loaf of bread from a poor town... Vincent paid for the bread and took the mistress in as for one of his own... She is repaying her debt to him by simply being the one to keep things in order... But if we are going to have a lady living with Vincent we are going to have to have a description for her too...

did that make any sense at all?
anyway thx so much so far...
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