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Vanessa
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 Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:35 am Post subject: Errata corrige page 24 issue 5 |
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For your information I made a small mistake in age 24 first pannel.
In it Red's balloon is actually a thought from Betty...What Red is saying is completely different. Since Ronald is out of town I will only be able to correct it after he returns.
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Foxonian
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 2:39 pm Post subject: |
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Well,it seem all that unusual to for that comment to come from Red.At least,it didn't seem odd to me.Still,no problem Vanessa! Mistakes are a part of life.  |
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UltimaWolf0
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 4:45 pm Post subject: |
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| Huh, interesting. |
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Ashton Gray
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 5:47 pm Post subject: |
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I KNEW there was something far out of place with that comment coming from a gentleman like Red Bordeaux! Mistakes are most certainly part of life, but it shows a lot that you owned up to it and mean to correct it, Vanessa.
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LabrnMystic
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:03 pm Post subject: |
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It didn't look too out of place Vanessa. I took it that Betty was saying it out loud, but the voice bubble was just a bit too close to Red. I didn't think he was saying both,
*shrugs* Just me I suppose, but I guess I feel the flow and mood of this story well.
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