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Aaron_Thom
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 5:28 pm    Post subject: Story Reply with quote

I've just written a story about my Avatar. I hope its somewhat good. I'm new at this so it may not be the best. But I'll try anything once. Hope you all like it. Let me know what areas need work on.

New Business


It hasn’t been long since Sir Clemens had passed away. Luckily he had a good amount of money from Mr. Barkley and what little pay from Sir Clemens to keep him going for a while. But it would not last forever. Sighing Thomas began looking through his personal affects. Two Colt pistols, short sward, derringer, Calvary sward, two sets of cloths, boots, and about $5000 dollars.

I’ve got to get to a bank and open up an account. Can’t walk around with that much money in my pockets.

Mr. Barkley had paid him well for his services. Almost too well but he wasn’t complaining. Looking out his window Thomas just couldn’t believe how beautiful BonBon looked. The streets clean, the mountain air crisp and the people seemed to be nice. BonBon looked like a good place to stay for a bit. Maybe even set up shop.

Hmm I have enough money to buy a small place…but who in BonBon needs a body guard though? *Sigh* Well it won’t hurt to try.

Quickly getting dressed and gathering his things Thomas Aaron, son of Clinton and Ann Aaron, paid and left the hotel he was staying at. Before leaving he asked the receptionist of any small places that might be for sale. When she told him of a few places he went to check them out.

One was a nice three story red and blue house near the outskirts of town with plenty of room. Three bedrooms, a bar, massive fireplace and so many other items to numerous to count…and way out of his price range.

Good lord I’ll be broke in a matter of weeks if I bought this place and its to far from the center of town where all the business is. Need to be closer.

He checked a smaller place near the market but though it looked nice on the out side the interior stunk of garbage and some of the walls were about ready to collapse.

Some people will try anything to make a quick buck…even trying to sell crap hole like this.

Throughout most of the day Thomas looked into a variety of place he could set up at. Some looked promising, others should have been condemned, while most where to far out of his price range. He soon settled on what was once an old flower shop near the main through way, close to some hotels and casinos. The last owner moved not to long ago but left the place clean. It was a two story building, with more then enough space to set up an office on the first floor. It had two bedrooms and a washroom on the second floor and in the back of the place where flowers were kept he could easily convert into an armory/office. And the price was reasonable. Only $800 for the place.

I think this will do nicely.

After finding the owner and paying for the place Thomas set about converting the flower shop. After a month of work and spending over $2000 he was done and ready to sell his services. After hanging a sign out side he entered in his new office, the sign stating: Thomas Aarons Personal Protection. Below the sign, near the door, was another sign detailing what Thomas’s job was: From guarding homes and belongings to personal protection. One of the big items was ‘Price for all services are negotiable.’

Thomas sat down with a satisfying sigh. He wasn’t expecting business for some time but not even a hour later a lovely vixen walks in. Surprised to see a possible employer so soon Thomas composes himself and welcomes her.

“Welcome miss my name is Thomas Aaron the owner of Thomas Aarons Personal Protection. Can I help you?”

“Umm yes you can. My name is Jayne Jacques and I have an item that needs to be delivered to a friend of mine. Her name is Rebecca Fran and she is staying at Carlos hotel near the train station. I would go there myself but I’m a very busy person and I don’t know who I can trust with this item. Its very expensive and the last time I trusted one of the couriers with something…well I won’t go into details.” She removed a small box from her purse and placed it on the table. She looked straight into his eyes, almost glaring. “Can I trust you with this?“

“Ma’am I will protect this item and make sure it gets to you friend safe and sound.” The tone of his voice getting very serious. “You have my word on it.”
“Very well but be careful Mr. Aaron, there are some men who want this item very badly. They’ve been following me for some time. So you have to get past them.”

“Don’t worry they won’t be a problem.”

Sighing the vixen stood up and reaching in her purse she gave him a small bag. “Very well Mr. Aaron I’m placing a lot of trust in you but I have a feeling you won’t let me down. That bag has half you pay, about 500 florin. My friend will pay you the other half when you delivered the package.” With that she gently shook his hand and walked out.

After getting his weapons and hat Thomas walks out and closes his shop. He knew where the hotel was at, seeing he stayed there after his last employer died from a heat attack. As he was walking to the station he noticed two fox and a panther following him. He turned a corner into an alley and they followed him. What they didn’t expect was to see him standing his arms crossed. “Can I help you gentlemen?”

One of the fox stepped forward and pulled a knife. “Yes you can give me the small bock that slut gave you. Otherwise thing are going to get messy.” The other two pulled out knives as well.

With a smirk Thomas charged right in, pulling out his short sward. In one quick motion he chopped the first fox hand off and the hilt of the sward knocked him out. He then charged in and with the flat end of his sward knocked the knives out of the other two’s hands. Shocked at how quickly and effectively he disabled them the fox and panther just stood there dumb founded. After cleaning his sward off and placing it back in the sheath Thomas turned to them.

“You better get your friend to a hospital before he bleeds to death.”

With that said the two assailants grabbed the now one handed fox and left at the other end of the alley. Knowing there type Thomas knew they would not tell the authorities. They probably had a record and didn’t need to add armed assault on it. With that Thomas continued to the Carlos Hotel. He soon arrived and after finding out where Rebecca was staying he knocked on her hotel door. When it opened a small but lovely raccoon stood in the door way.

“Miss Rebecca Fran?”

“Yes?”

“I have the item that Miss Jayne Jacques wanted you to have.” He takes the small box out of his pocket.

With a squeal of delight she quickly takes the box from his hand and opens it. In the box was a diamond ring worth thousands of dollars.

She looked up at Thomas and smiled sweetly. “This ring belonged to my grandmother. She had to sell it to keep my mother and two uncles fed. I finally made enough money to buy it back but the day I was to get the ring the one I bought it from cheated me.” She closed the box and invited Thomas in.

“Thank you very much for getting this to me. I hope there was no trouble. Jayne said there was some men following her. Oh and your pay is on the end table.”

Thomas walked over to the table where the small bag was, “Yes she told me the same thing but the funny thing is I never saw them. She must have given them the slip.” He back was turned so Rebecca never saw the grin on his face and put the money in his pocket.

“Aren’t you going to count it?”

“No need I trust its all there.”

“Well then Mr….”

“Thomas Aaron at your service.”

“Well Mr. Aaron thank you again for bringing this to me.”

“My pleasure Ma’am.” Bowing respectfully Thomas took his leave and left the hotel.

As he walked back to his home and office he smiled and patted his pocket.

Well not a bad start. Who would have thought that BonBon would have this type of excitement. Heheh I wouldn’t want to be in those guys shoes when they have to tell their boss they failed. Oh well, sucks to be them.

Placing his hand behind his back Thomas Aaron began to whistle The Battle Hyme of the Republic and thought of the future in his new home.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 9:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Excitement and intrigue all in one. Nicely done.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 6:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great story! ^.^
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the positive remarks Very Happy . I'm thinking of writing another one but have to think on how the next one will pan out. I have a few ideas but I have to see first.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 4:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If your next installment is more of the same, I am excited to see. Smile
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