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whispering feathers Rank: Senior Member

Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 186
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 1:19 am Post subject: so what... |
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Sky day dreamin craven vanilla flavor
So what if the girl you’ve been chasin after
Is in to something other than what you are not
Just as sure we all come to realize
We are all looking for the importance that can be so easily forgotten
World fallen over strawberries drowning in soda crème
So what if your school days were popular up until you were eighteen
Bed time stories are over
Time to realize our dreams become the life we lead
Waking up learning life don’t hand out four leaf clovers
For those who don’t have to work hard to achieve
Love stencil traces of first time crush memories
Note book cover exposing my heart so everyone else can see
Trying so hard to recapture
The kind of feeling that’s suppose to make us stay young
We lose touch with getting older and become some what immature
Sometimes we can see our own ambition setting with the sun
Ginger bread houses melting candy heart shape kisses
So what if cupid ignored your every wish
Life is what you chase after for if your interested in living
Taken the best out of what is your good fortune
No more will you worry about what you will gain from another but what you can give...
Total Eclipse of the Moon August 28th this was written for my Dad's 60th Birthday! _________________ With Lots of Love n Hugs!!!
Kevin (Whispering Feathers) |
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AlleyBaggett Official Model

Joined: 15 Dec 2003 Posts: 2358
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 8:24 am Post subject: |
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Aw KEV,
It is really really nice and so sweet. You are so creative!
Did your Dad like your poem?
I can't wait to see all your stuff in a coffee table book of some sorts.
Thank you for sharing your creative thoughts with us.
XOXO
ALLEY  _________________ xoxoxo
ALLEY!
AlleyBaggett.Net - The Official Site
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HotDog4U Rank: Rookie
Joined: 31 Aug 2007 Posts: 69
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 10:49 am Post subject: |
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What the? |
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HotDog4U Rank: Rookie
Joined: 31 Aug 2007 Posts: 69
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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ooh. I just read the forum rules. Hope I didn't offend you Whispering Feathers! Just playing fun.
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HotDog4U Rank: Rookie
Joined: 31 Aug 2007 Posts: 69
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 3:44 pm Post subject: |
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Hey Whispering. If I had half your talent I'd be something. Don't take my comments the wrong way. You are the man!
Sincerely,
HotDog (Damage control extraodinaire) |
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runriot Rank: Casual
Joined: 06 Sep 2007 Posts: 10
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 12:28 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, So what. |
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