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[Ronald]

Yair (our artist) has finished the next School Girl's Revenge #3 story already. We're still working on cleaning up the comic pages and adding the sound effects and lettering. The final touches etc.... So we'll be posting that soon.

Issue#3 was based on suggestions from a previous posting:

[pbarkley]

First off, I'd like to thank and congratulate Yair on producing the finest erotic graphic narrative I've seen anywhere, in web or in print. The artwork is outstanding, the situations well-conceived and execution of stories are superbly erotic -- that is, intelligent and sexy, the very core of erotic. Erotic art, at its zenith, is more than dirty pictures or simple naughty chuckles. Yair's work really reaches into the realm of the naughty imagination and brings substance to fantasy.

It's difficult to come up with full stories that would be better than Yair could produce himself. Nevertheless, some naughty starting points that I'd like to see...

* A boy student with a water pistol has been having fun nailing girls. Girls corner him, hold him against a wall and pull out the pistol from his trousers and have a bit of fun doing their own target practice. I'd think they'd set up some candles, aiming to put them out.
* Girl student is in a painting class, isn't doing very well producing realistic art, is going to get a failing grade. She stays after class to convince the teacher that abstract art is the way to go -- demonstrates her talent by jerking his jism onto a canvas and making patterns. She keeps him around for rounds 2 and 3, jerking cum onto her tits and pushing them against the canvas to add to the pattern, and then onto her face for the final stamp.
* Physics class. Two girls geeks have a disagreement about ballistics -- each thinks they have a technique that can make their teacher cum further than they other gal can. They get their hunky teacher involved in an experiment to determine the greatest height of the trajectory and distance. They use a measuring tape to figure out far they've shot.

I've got a few more ideas, but I'll post these first, see if they're headed anywhere the near the right direction.

Yair, once again, I salute you. With no disrespect to the other talented artists at eadultcomics, you're the reason I joined.

best,

pbarkley

[pbarkley]

okay, I can't resist, one more...

Janitor (I'm imagining a well-hung, somewhat middle-age african am guy...) has been all but terrorizing a particular classroom of gals, telling them "You can't keep the floors clean for 15 minutes!" The gals decide to take revenge. One afternoon, after they've cleared out, they leave behind some dirty pix of themselves in a sealed envelope. Janitor opens them up, peeks through them, starts getting a bit excited. Gals come back in the room, start taunting him that he's not clean at all, he's really dirty. "No, no, no...keep it clean..." while they take him apart and fuck his brains out. "Betcha can't keep it clean for 15 minutes!" "NO!" He can't contain himself and shoots. The gals have a tumbler ready. Janitor is relieved his floor is clean but then the gals spill it out, messing the floor. Gals leave and janitor has to clean the floor. Heh!

[Ronald]

Those are some interesting ideas/suggestions PBarkley.

I'll make sure we pass them on to our writers and artists. We'll see what we can work into the stories.

-R
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[Ronald]

[Ronald]

[pbarkley]

Wow, I feel like this is commissioned art! I will rejoin just to see this one from Yair.

Thanks so much for taking my suggestions. I look forward to seeing these fantasies realized in beautiful comic art.

And I have to say, the art really is a cut above. Everything from colors to layout to silhouetting is top-notch.

best,

pbarkley

[raen]

Not sure if you are still accepting suggestions, but I have a few ideas that may be workable.

But first, I just wanted to note that these are some great comics. The art and story telling is pretty good. Keep up (no pun intended) the good work!

Also, as I am new member, I don't know if some of these ideas have been covered already in the other issues. Disregard as appropriate

So, for my suggestions:

1. There is a dance with a nearby all-boys catholic school. Unlike the girls, many of the boys are demure and shy until they are seduced (and shocked) by the girls. An orgy ensues.

2. The girls are required to do volunteer work. The girls decide to be volunteers are a local catholic hospital, where they provide "comfort" to the patients and doctors. A bit cliched, so the setting could be changed to something different, perhaps a local jail or something.

3. The girls sneak out and go to a nightclub. There, under the strobe and flashing lights, they give a sex show to the other dancers. For this to work, i envision panels where there is darkness alternating with panels of sexual activitiy on a crowded dance floor. The sex is seen but only in glimpses.

[Ronald]

Raen - I love it!

Your suggestions are great!!

I like the dance and the hospital one.... Maybe Nurse Harrison might tell the girls to go there to learn a thing or two....


Actually.... Yair is working on a new idea that involves Nurse Harrison being fired by the new supervisor...... this could tie into Nurse Harrison working at the hospital and the girls help her there.


Great suggestions!!!
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[Ronald]

The next school girl story will be based on another members suggestion with the janitor!


Its going to be a bit longer then the usual 10 pages.


-R
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