![Forum Index](templates/subSilver/images/logo_phpBB.gif) |
SexyFighters.com Violence, Profanity, and Nudity - Catfighting at it's best!
|
View previous topic :: View next topic |
Author |
Message |
Vanessa Official Artist
![](images/avatars/gallery/moderator_only/portrait_vanessa_pbb.gif)
Joined: 13 Nov 2004 Posts: 1088
|
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2015 9:15 am Post subject: The relationship between Mary and Betty. |
|
|
I'd like to participate to the discussions about the story developing, but you know that I am a bit timid because I do not write well in English and I am ashamed for errors , however I would like to know if is clear for you all the relationship between Mary and Betty and I try to interact more anyway, if you do not care too much about my errors...
About the question on Mary and Betty I mean what do they think of each other and what kind of bond unites them. I suppose that I was quite clear in the story, leaving clues here and there... (about Edelweiss too) but maybe I not have been enough. Let me know your opinions ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) _________________
http://www.pleasurebonbon.com |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Silvador Royal Member of BonBon
![](images/avatars/gallery/moderator_only/Silvador.gif)
Joined: 20 Oct 2009 Posts: 12351
|
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2015 9:23 am Post subject: |
|
|
Your English isn't too bad. And practise can only help you to improve it. As for the errors, we make mistakes so that we can learn from them.
As far as the relationship between Mary and Betty goes, I get the impression that, at current times, it's a close friendship, much like between siblings. However, I suspect that in the future it could quite easily be a relationship of lovers, and that Betty may even already want such a relationship with Mary. I get the impression that Mary might very well be open to this, but simply isn't aware of it yet. _________________
![](http://i1000.photobucket.com/albums/af128/Silvador/personal/th_logo.png) ![](http://i1000.photobucket.com/albums/af128/Silvador/personal/f_1251130612662_felicia-originalsta.gif)
Fursonas: http://tinyurl.com/yzcsyug |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Caroline Royal Member of BonBon
![](images/avatars/gallery/moderator_only/Caroline.gif)
Joined: 22 Dec 2008 Posts: 2173
|
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2015 7:16 pm Post subject: |
|
|
(( Hey Vanessa,
For what it's worth, your English is way better than my Italian, so no worries. At least I'm assuming your native tongue is Italian.
Anyway, overall I get the impression that Mary and Betty are the "not-love-interest" couple. What I mean is that, while Mary is really curious about adult situations and Mary is willing to teach Betty... I don't really see either having romantic or deep-felt feelings for each other in that way. They're more... older sister / younger sister to me. I get the impression that Betty wants to keep Mary from making the same mis-steps she made growing up. And, from the other side, I see Mary idolizing Betty due to her wordly-ness.
Anyway, overall... I don't see it as romantic. More two sisters growing up. )) |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
ToddRogue69 Rank: Mr. Fabulous
![](images/avatars/gallery/PleasureBonBon/Mary.4.jpg)
Joined: 25 Dec 2015 Posts: 438
|
Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 4:25 pm Post subject: |
|
|
For me the relationship between Mary and Betty is a pretty strong bond of friendship, because the two have many things in common. Like how they both feel alone in the world, that they both didn't have a mother they could talk to, and I also guess that they are connected due to Red Boredeaux being betrothed to Mary and falling in love with Betty while helping them send letters to each other. But I think that their friendship might be taken to the next level by two methods. One, Mary had become a very beautiful young woman and has a way of being alluring even if she doesn't really believe it herself. Two, Betty has become bisexual not only seducing male customers but also having sex with her friend Violet from time to time. But we never really see Betty being intimate with the other women of Bon Bon. I think that this might change once Betty see's Mary again for the first time since they were seperated. Betty might start to develop certain feelings about Mary, but she would try to hold back out of fear that Mary would not understand or that she would react to her advances in the wrong way. So Betty would start slow by talking to Mary about the books and letters she has sent her over the years and how there is so much more to love that what she has read about. This of course would remind Betty of Red and what she told her in the past issue, But she would brush it off as she would continue to to explain the other methods of love eventually getting around to homosexual love. This would cause Mary to bring up Wilson her new gay butler that she tried to seduce but he rejected her. This would cause Betty to become a bit agitated at William, but quickly regaining her composure before Mary would notice. But then Betty would start to explain the love between two women, this would spark Mary's curiosity and asks Betty "how a woman could get sexual pleasure from another woman?" This would cause Betty to lean in close to Mary and ask her "would you like to find out?" Betty would then slowly begin to caress Mary seductively but sweetly. At first Mary is a bit nervous but as Betty slowly caresses Mary's body, Mary slowly gives in letting Betty undress her as Betty gets undressed with her. Then Betty would brush her hand against Mary's cheek as she leans in and kisses her on the mouth. Sorry I got a bit carried away Anyways I think that both Mary and Betty would develop somewhat of a romantic relationship and that Mary would be hesitant at first but would slowly give into Betty's advancements especially after being denied by both Wilson and Red. And finally I believe that Mary will lose her virginity not to William or Red, but to Betty. At least I hope she does personally. _________________ https://e621.net/user/show/143867
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/toddrogue69/
https://toddrogue69.sofurry.com/ |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
ToddRogue69 Rank: Mr. Fabulous
![](images/avatars/gallery/PleasureBonBon/Mary.4.jpg)
Joined: 25 Dec 2015 Posts: 438
|
Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 4:26 pm Post subject: |
|
|
For me the relationship between Mary and Betty is a pretty strong bond of friendship, because the two have many things in common. Like how they both feel alone in the world, that they both didn't have a mother they could talk to, and I also guess that they are connected due to Red Boredeaux being betrothed to Mary and falling in love with Betty while helping them send letters to each other. But I think that their friendship might be taken to the next level by two methods. One, Mary had become a very beautiful young woman and has a way of being alluring even if she doesn't really believe it herself. Two, Betty has become bisexual not only seducing male customers but also having sex with her friend Violet from time to time. But we never really see Betty being intimate with the other women of Bon Bon. I think that this might change once Betty see's Mary again for the first time since they were seperated. Betty might start to develop certain feelings about Mary, but she would try to hold back out of fear that Mary would not understand or that she would react to her advances in the wrong way. So Betty would start slow by talking to Mary about the books and letters she has sent her over the years and how there is so much more to love that what she has read about. This of course would remind Betty of Red and what she told her in the past issue, But she would brush it off as she would continue to to explain the other methods of love eventually getting around to homosexual love. This would cause Mary to bring up Wilson her new gay butler that she tried to seduce but he rejected her. This would cause Betty to become a bit agitated at William, but quickly regaining her composure before Mary would notice. But then Betty would start to explain the love between two women, this would spark Mary's curiosity and asks Betty "how a woman could get sexual pleasure from another woman?" This would cause Betty to lean in close to Mary and ask her "would you like to find out?" Betty would then slowly begin to caress Mary seductively but sweetly. At first Mary is a bit nervous but as Betty slowly caresses Mary's body, Mary slowly gives in letting Betty undress her as Betty gets undressed with her. Then Betty would brush her hand against Mary's cheek as she leans in and kisses her on the mouth. Sorry I got a bit carried away Anyways I think that both Mary and Betty would develop somewhat of a romantic relationship and that Mary would be hesitant at first but would slowly give into Betty's advancements especially after being denied by both Wilson and Red. And finally I believe that Mary will lose her virginity not to William or Red, but to Betty. At least I hope she does personally. _________________ https://e621.net/user/show/143867
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/toddrogue69/
https://toddrogue69.sofurry.com/ |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Symphony Royal Member of BonBon
![](images/avatars/gallery/moderator_only/Symphony.gif)
Joined: 13 Apr 2008 Posts: 2620
|
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
ToddRogue69 Rank: Mr. Fabulous
![](images/avatars/gallery/PleasureBonBon/Mary.4.jpg)
Joined: 25 Dec 2015 Posts: 438
|
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
|
|
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum
|
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2002 phpBB Group
|