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Seeing Life
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 Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 10:38 pm Post subject: A Ghost Arrives |
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Hello to you all! It's been a while and College was keeping me on my toes. But now I'm back thanks to the summer and with a new fursona.
Name: Lucian “Ghost” Plata
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Species: Artic Wolf
Sexuality: Straight
Occupation: Public: Unemployed and looking for work; Private: Assassin
Height: 6’3”
Eye Color: Bright Blue on his left eye, this symbol on his right covered by his hair
Fur Color: White
Birthplace: Spain
Appearance: Athletic, has long silver hair that covers his right eye.
Clothing: Loose clothing, normally seen in a regular shirt, jeans, and sandals. As a mercenary, he ware nothing but white to uphold his nickname.
Personality: Silent, often seen with a frown (he doesn’t like smiling that much). Only speaks when he feels like it.
Weapon: http://www.swords.ws/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/swords-17.jpg
History: Life didn’t bless Lucian. If anything, it has been nothing but hardships and sorrow. It began at the age of 9. He idolized his father and dreamed of being just like him, to be a royal guard for the king and queen. One stormy night, Lucian was just finishing training when he herd an argument. He peeked inside to see his own father murder his mother. The dad saw him and decided to silence him. Still with sword in hand, Lucian surprised his dad and stabs him in his heart. Plenty of emotions ran through his mind until he snapped and ran away.
Alone a hungry, Lucian was soon taken in by a kind man and his wife. For the next few years, Lucian worked, trained and studied the arts of swordsmanship. With a decent education, he traveled and help provide for them. He thought he finally found piece of mind, but sadly it wasn’t to be. A gang, hired by aristocrats, barged in and murdered the coupled. Lucian fought as hard as he could, but was defeated and was trapped in the house as it caught fire. He escapes, he looked different. His short hair was long and he held two swords. The smile on his face was gone as revenge flows through his veins It was as if he made a deal with the devil to revive him and hunt down that gang that did this.
Now at the age of thirty, he has made a name of himself as the silent assassin named Ghost. A silent killer who only targets corrupt aristocrats and harm the innocent. A master of disguise, he quietly approaches his victim and finishes them. His reputation spreads like wildfire as wanted posters emerges wanting him captured. Too bad for them, it’s difficult capturing a ghost. His goal was simple: To avenge his foster family by ending the ones that murder them...and stole his life.
Quote: “Soy un fantasma ... nada más.” (I am a ghost…nothing more.) |
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Seeing Life
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| Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 7:06 pm Post subject: |
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Lucian: ......
Umm...he thanks you for what you said. |
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Seeing Life
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| Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 8:07 am Post subject: |
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-Gives Wolf an evil glare-
Umm....I'm guessing that's a no. |
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Caroline
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| Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 3:43 pm Post subject: |
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(( Hey Seeing Life,
Well... consider yourself "blessed". The grand-high-poobah-of-disinterest-in-new-members has decided to quickly comment on your character. First and foremost, these are my opinions. So, as such, them and 99 cents will get you a cup of coffee. In other words, they're my opinions. Nothing more.
Okay... so... another "grim-dark-bodyguard" new member? Really? I mean... why not something non-combatant? Or at least not grim-dark. Pleasure Bon Bon doesn't seem to be too... epic-depressing. It has its dramatic moments, but... overall the feel is just a sexy adventure... sort of "Dream On" style. And, have you seen how many other... grizzled-assassin-commando-judo-kung-fu-veterns hang out at Bon Bon? Thinking of that, why not a sailor? You have some of the hottest girls, all in one place, who know how to entertain. And Booze! And Booty! And did I mention the booze? What sailor wouldn't want to goto Bon Bon? We have like one seaman in the entire batch. I guess Captain Tursi doesn't like getting the word out to his other scalywags.
Anyway, you could have just as easily been a more Robin Hood, Green Arrow, Captain Morgan, Zorro sort of theif-avenger, and not really change much of your character at all. Or, what about some swashbuckling, pirate, adventurer. What sort of pirate doesn't like booty! And Bon Bon is swimming in booty! And, being a Robin Hood or Zorro or Captain Morgan, to me, would still leave a lot for character development, without being the... seeming standard depressing start.
So... there you go. My quick thoughts. )) |
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Seeing Life
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| Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:04 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks for the 99 cent opinion. |
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