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 Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 6:51 pm Post subject: The Thornton Name Disgraced *OPEN* |
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Abigail sat in the back of the stagecoach as it made its way down the long, bending, bumping road. She could hear the crack or the rains when the driver yelled at his horses, she could hear the stone on the ground outside hit and crumble under the wooden wheels as the coach moved. She had just woken up, so the noises were quite a good thing to study to her. It was always her morning ritual, open the window and listen to the rustle of life to bring you out of your sleep.
She sighed and looked to her side, she only had a small case with her, it contained a change of clothes and some money, she was not exactly prepared for this new life but her intrigue for the world beyond her own was enough to force herself onward. Indeed she had heard stories of this town. Complete mystery, unnamed people who want to escape society and judging eyes. Sounded perfect to her!
The driver shouted to the horses as the stage coach slowed down to a halt.
She could see the scenery and buildings outside, it seemed quaint town at first sight. She opened the carriage door and got out, curtsying to the driver before walking away from the driver.
Unfortunately by the time she realised her bag was missing the driver was long gone.
The shock made her almost burst into tears, she couldn't handle it if she turned into a penniless perner! She then looked around the town and headed for the centre of town, seeing all sorts of outfitted women on the street, she breathed heavily as she began to feel faint at the difference in their behaviour. "Oh, my, my mother warned me of women such as these!" she said to herself as she took a seat on a nearby marble fountain seeing as she felt as if she was about to collapse.
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link who was sitting high up in a oak tree watched a coach pulling up yawning he looked down expecting to see another feline and got a surprise when a rabbit walked out.
watching her with intreast he saw her curtsying to the driver and look at the city of bon bon looking at the coach he saw she had left her bag in there and the coach had left.
seeing her running away upset link hated to see a lady upset and decided to chase after the coach jumping down from the tree he made chase for and caught up to it very quikly
"whooo whooo stop please hey" seeing the coach stop link headed strait for the door and wrenched it open grabbing the bag the coach driver seeing link was about to yell at him but he had alraedy takeing off in pursit of the rabbit.
"ahh where is she i need to find her" asking one of the many woman in the street one told him that she saw a female rabbit siiting at the marble fountain in the center of town.
link thanking her headid to the place he was told and finally spoted her breating heavy he walked up to her holding out her bag "ma'am i think this belongs to ya" the huge cheetah said complty out of breath"
((just a heads up but i wont be able to post to very late tonight about 11pm so i aplogizes so if ya want to contiue without me please go ahead)).
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She looked to the cheetah and her face light up with relief.
"Oh my goodness! thank you sir!"
She took the bag and examined it, slowly her face looked more anxious and when she opened the bag she sighed and frowned.
"Thank you sir, but it's the wrong bag. You must have taken the wrong one from the luggage on the seat, there was a few bags there."
She began to rub her eyes and sniff, trying to hide her tearing.
(Lol sorry to spoil your "Heroics" but I was hoping for a no money in a strange town story. And of course I understand, anyone who still wants to join can jump in at any time.)
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She sniffed and opened her eyes, looking to Kyle.
*Sniff* "Yes, I'm just a little *sniff* tired"
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happy he could help he was about to say something when her reaction changed.
"im sorry i guess i was in such a hurry i grabbed the wrong bag huh? turning around he spoted kyle walking towards them.
"hey kyle im fine apart from i failed to help this young lady" looking back the female rabbit he felt bad for messing up.
"well ma'am your welcome to take a rest at my home it's not to far away i can at least offer ya somewhere to rest"
link scrathed the back of his head still fellling bad for messing up
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She finally got over it and wiped her eyes, then hearing the cheetah request she blushed.
"Oh good heavens no! I barely know you well enough to accept such a gracious offer sir!" She felt dizzy as she said this, she had never spoken to two men she didn't know at the same time.
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"no i moved because of work i need to live closer to town now so i packed up sold house and moved to a bigger homer"
link looked back at the rabbit and gave a freindly look "ma'am i can't leave a lady out in the cold to freaze ii would less worried knowing that ya had somewhere warm to stay".
link noded to her and smiled again "yes i understnd ma'am true ya know nothing about me and my freind here but we truely wish to help ya"
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Rhoda was sitting on the same fountain and had heard the whole conversation. She decided to try and help out the best she could, so she turned around and tried her best "Take it from me Miss, this town is a lot more friendly than any other you'll find." she said with a smile.
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"Well, I suppose I could stay at someone's home for a while if I was allowed do work as the maid as well. I like to work for my stay." She tried to be as positive as she could. She smiled to the mountain lion wearily and then continued.
"My... My name is Abigail Thornton, Miss Abigail Thornton."
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"Oh hey Kyle." Rhoda said before facing Abigail again "Well Miss Thornton, I think you'll find Bon Bon quite to your liking. The women here are treated with the utmost respect." she said with a smile.
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"Well, Rhoda... I'm not worried it's just, I've never been in a town like this. I don't know what to expect from this place... I did see a few Courtesans, but this place seems friendly enough"
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"Well that's most kind of you, Mr Kyle. I must ask, how many people occupy your home?" She said.
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"Um" she was a little puzzled.
"If it's so hard to keep with your job, what makes you sure you can afford a guest and a maid?"
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(Sory, posted twice)
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She thought for a second and smiled, feeling more comfortable around them all.
"For a man who's job is to understand people, you sure are hard to understand yourself!" She laughed a little then blushed slightly. "If you'll forgive the impertinence of the statement, Mr. Kyle."
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"Well, Right now I'm a little hungry" She said as her stomach proceeded to rumble and she laughed, embarrassed.
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"I'm... I would be delighted just as long as we're al properly introduced." Said Abigail shyly. This life was going to be very different but change was what she wanted.
It would only require time.
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She waved as Link left and looked to Mayfield for her answer.
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(won't be able to post till later tonight, just a heads up)
"Well, I am kind of hungry. And lunch does sound good right about now." Rhoda said holding her stomach slightly.
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Abigail smiled and said "I like much of any kind of cuisine."
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