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[Aaron_Thom]

Since the RP has taken off I've decided to remove this post and just post randomly. I'm hoping more people will join up. So far things have gotten interesting. So if anyone wants to join then jump right in and post an intro story. There aren't really any set rules here, just read the posts that are up now and you'll get the idea where this RP is headed.
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[Wolf Stride]

Don't worry, i don't think anyone here is gonna sock you......hopefully.
I like the concept and the idea but as for anything else, you wouldn have to ask older members.
Although it would be pretty awesome.
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[dragonfly]

well aaron i pretty much like this idea but im not sure if useing other people avatar's to be a good idea without there permission.

if you would to use my furson then your more then welcome to use him if you need his details i can post here a small description or bump up his details but only if you want to.

other then that yeah brilliant idea i say.
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[Aaron_Thom]

Its the reason I put this up dragonfly, to more or less get peoples permission. I really don't need much, just a general description of what your character looks like and what his place would be; is he a soldier, spy, member of the Imperial court and so forth.
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[dragonfly]

position he would be im not to sure but he dose have a very violent past.

but probably put him down as a mercenary but he's hard to control especially when he is angry.

heres a small description about him,

name: link hunter collins

age: 21

spices; cheetah

eyes: his left eye is blood red his right eye is sky blue

hair/fur; long black hair tied back in a pony tail normal cheetah style fur but the tip of his tail is red.

markings; scar across his left eye and another scar starting from his top right shoulder blade to his lower left back.

higet\build; 6'8' 258 lbs very muscular for his spices a lot stronger then most normal people.

i thinck thats ok if you need any more information just ask.

do you want the information about his sword's as well.
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[Wolf Stride]

If that's the case then you could also use mine.
He could be a surgeon in you're army.
Ironic that Link also has a scar.
Wolf has one on his right eye but he covers it with a black bandana.
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[Aaron_Thom]

Just the type of swords and thats good dragonfly thanks and defiantly need a surgeon thanks Wolf.
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[Wolf Stride]

No problem

Name: Wolf Stride

Age:22

Weapons of choice: Handguns of any caliber, knives, Surgical tools

Species: Alaskan Gray Wolf

Position: Head Surgeon of the 7th Surgical division, also second in command of 3rd Spec Ops unit.

Personal weapon: 8 inch knife and Heavily modified Five-SeveN

Marks of notice: Right eye is scarred heavily, covered by black bandana.
(Need something else, just ask.)
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[Aaron_Thom]

That works Wolf thanks... I guess I just need a little bit about their personalities is all and that should be good, sorry I should have brought it up sooner.
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[Wolf Stride]

Well most of it is on my signature, but if you don't wanna read that much i can summarize it for ya.

Mentality: Very Serious and cold. Very silent when its needed.
Works well under pressure and doesn't break easily.
Tries always to improvise on a worsening situation and sees how it plays out.
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[Aaron_Thom]

That'll do thanks Wolf
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[Caroline]

((Being as I've been watching a lot of Battlestar Galactica, Robotech, and Martian Successor Nandesiko, I'll give you a long-winded writer/director post after I get back from work today.))

[Mr Writer]

actualy sounds like a good idea. if you went in this far with the details, im sure you already have the main body of the plot down.

if your in need of a mid grade military officer, Alexi woudl make a good choice, as that is what he was in the soviet army. he was also a hand to hand combat expert, and could easily take on armed combatents in close combat.

if you need more info, you can find it in my fursona in my sig.
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[dragonfly]

his weapons are both custom made katanas one is called sol the other is called luna.

personality; link has a split personality loyal kind to his companion's always make's sure he is ready for anything also quite flirty with female cats and vixens but on a battle field he is brutal cold and shows no mercy to his enemies, he will not listen to anyone and being as he's not afraid to die.


also aaron i only just noticed this but you forgot about some of the royal members.

sha'kaar and taz alexander vox.
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[Caroline]

((Alright, Aaron, as promised here are my hopefully helpful comments. Mind you I’m going to be rambling as all bejiminies, so as to help you focus your ideas.

First, why two different “Empires”. If you want a “Good” team and an “Evil” team, Empires tended to be associated with evil. As such, having two “Empires” would be more of a darker sort of story… a “which evil do you pick” sort of totalitarian future. So… why not like a Concordant vs. the Empire. The advantage is two-fold. One, your audience won’t have to wonder what Empire you’re talking about. And, two, it lends itself to the theme idea that an Empire is always ready for war while a Concordant is not. So maybe the High Princess Betty has to issue a general conscription notice, as there is no time to get a “normal” army that could lead to how everyone is in 9th Legion. They were conscripted into it. Sometimes a simple idea conveys a lot of background just on its own. (On that side, “Legion” also tends to have negative connotations as well… maybe the Rim Concordant uses Mustered Soldiery or Militia or something… I do kinda like the RCMS… as the acronym looks a lot like “The Royal Canadian Mounted Police… RCMP.”))

Next… Background. Background is always important. It’ll help you flesh things out, or use good symbolisms to represent stuff, so you won’t have to flesh out a lot. Perhaps Czar Simon is the headmaster of the Imperium of the Million Suns or something… which conveys the idea of a vast, wealthy, powerful, totalitarian dictatorship. By calling it that, your audience already will start to have ideas that the Imperium is huge… it has “million” right in the title. Also, while it does lend itself to sort of a King Louis the XVI sorts of ideas that the aristocracy of the Imperial lives in utter wealth and opulence, but the general masses are downtrodden… their only hope to join the Imperial Legions where they can loot and plunder all they want.

While High Princess Betty, of the Rim Concordant is the leader of a loosely confederated bunch of smaller star systems. Their strength lies in diversity, and the fact that since they are smaller, they can act faster. But it also leaves open plot arcs where the Concordant, since it isn’t ruled by the iron-fist of Czar Simon, tends to get slogged down in turf-wars, old feuds, outdated technologies, and general aptness for each party to think of themselves first. But that could also allow for character development, like how Betty goes from a nervous, indecisive girl, to being a great, charismatic, leader.

Anyway, one thing to keep in mind is how the two of them are related. Was the Concordant, at one point, part of the Imperium? Are they Separatists? Have they always been unaligned, and considered “unimportant” by the Imperium until recently? Perhaps they’re becoming an uppity vassal state? Determining your overarching relationship between the two galactic powers can lead to all sorts of story ideas or game play ideas. Maybe the Imperium quarantined the area decades ago to prevent “Space Plague” from becoming a pandemic… and only now remembers that those star systems even exist. Maybe they finally checked the tax books and realized that the Rim hasn’t paid taxes for several decades. Maybe Czar Simon just feels slighted some how by some huge diplomatic gaffe, and wishes to punish the insult by vicious force.

Which leads me into my next two-part topic… your villain. Czar Simon has to be up to the task. Which means you have to give him a good motivation. You might be fine with the old “Bad Guy Wants to Rule” sort of thing; however, most audiences these days want something a little deeper… to make Simon human. Sure, he’s the villain, but if only his idea could be untwisted. For example, maybe Simon’s own mystics told him of a great evil coming, and that only if the two galactic powers unit does any hope of survival last. But… he also knows no one will believe just a fanciful story and diplomacy will take too long. So, in an effort to save everyone, he declares war on the Rim. Thinking about your villain’s motivation will make him more human… and potentially more evil.

But a villain has to be up to the task. One of the things I hate about Star Wars: The Clone Wars is that the Separatists are so… stupid and pathetic. Seriously, how many times do they lose? And how do they ever get anyone else to join them? Villains need to be up to the task. A good villain could be someone like Magneto. Sure, the X-Men have beaten him umpteen times, but… he’s powerful, charismatic, patient, and learns from his own mistakes. He becomes more and more dangerous each time the X-Men face him, and each time the audience wonders if Magneto really might win this time. Not only that, take a look at his motivation. He wants mutants to quit being in hiding. He knows his kind is superior, and shouldn’t have to fear the “normals.” But, he is getting impatient with doing this the peaceful, diplomatic way. He believes in full-on revolution. If the norms don’t get with the program, by the Light, Magneto will force them to get with it.

Now… onto your characters. First, and foremost, what sort of story / RPG are you shooting for? Right now, it sounds like you want an action / adventure sort of story full of mecha, starships, laser beams, and rockets that zip around everything in massive explosions. Which is good… except, right now, you’ve pretty much assigned all the girls to being potential damsels in distress. You’ve got Dr. Fuchs and Jinx as the only two who aren’t “Duchesses” or “Handmaidens”. Really… Jinx isn’t a tank commander / mecha pilot? Or at least a tank commander? Jinx… I can see Dr. Fuchs not being a front-line troop, but… Jinx? If you want an action / adventure story, you might want to consider making your 9th RCMS more open to having girl soldiers as well. Or… if you insist on girls not being able to fight (make it some old Rim Concordant protocol that women can’t serve or something… another fall-out effect from some “Space Plague”) that could lead to ideas that the girls might work for Czar Simon.

For example, I’ve established that Caroline actually can shoot really well… sort of Annie Oakley style. She’s got a well-mainted Sharpp’s Long Rifle that she uses for target practice. The Rim says she can’t enlist cause she’s a girl… so… in a fit of spite rage, she joins Czar Simon’s team… and the next time you see her, she’s wearing sleeked-out, black, space-armor, wielding a rifle twice her size that has a scope the size of a tree-trunk fighting against her former Rim friends. And, all of this is because you’ve established that the Rim doesn’t allow for women in the army.

Also, as a side note, since it’s the future, what about something like Psychers or such? For example, Mystic’s name alone implies the ability to tap into her 6th sense, and foretell the future. Maybe Czar Simon wants the Rim Concordant because the Rim has the largest concentration of natural psycher-capable people in it. Which could also lead to such story tangents as the Imperium’s “Project: Oracle” where they, using dark technology and inhumane science, develop powerful psychers that they plan on using as weapons. Which could lead to whole story arcs of the Rim psycher’s trying to “save” the Oracles.

Now, if you’d rather have something more action adventure, you should open up your roles to the girls too. Maybe they’re mecha / fighter pilots… maybe they use powered armor or something. As it is… I’m kinda disappointed that you’ve pretty much made all your girls into potential princesses to be rescued.

Along those lines, keep things simple. If you want Aaron to be an NCO, have him be an NCO… you really don’t need to go into such detail as SSG Aaron, 5th CORPS, 4th DIV, 3rd BDE, 58th BN, 394th IN CO(-), Green Platoon, Squad 4. (and yes, I do know what I just typed there. My dad spent 20+ years serving.) Just make him SSG Aaron, and leave it at that. Detail is nice… but some details are just being show-offy. It’s one of the reasons I’ve never liked Tom Clancy books.

Else, if you want more of a “court intrigue” sort of setting, where you’d want a lot of spies, courtesans, dukes, barons, priests, princesses, prophets, etc, then you’d need to make the men more statesmen or mayors or something.

Overall, it is probably easier to do an “action / adventure” than “drama / intrigue” sort of story… so it might just be easier to open up the Rim to girl soldiers.

But, as I alluded to earlier, what about people who want to work for the Imperium. A story like this is non-cannon, and maybe someone would actually enjoy working for the villains or something… Maybe they were tricked into it, or promised that their home-world would become autonomous if they’d help Czar Simon take the Rim. For example, maybe Dr. Fuchs is actually in charge of the Imperium’s Project: Oracle. You could even use it for the story-arcs of redemption, or maybe they see Czar Simon, and his autocracy, for what it is and switch allegiances or such.

Yeah… I spend a lot of time story-boarding, if you couldn’t tell. I know… lame. Hope this helps some. I think I’ve rambled quit a bit for you to chew on. ))

[Tearlach]

If you need inspiration for names for planets ect, just look in your local library.
Libris, a world dedicated to the collection and storage of all knowledge.
Emperor Simon Blue's kohinoor Empire (Kohinoor means "mountain of light" and is the name of the world's largest diamond)

You see all you need is a lot of books and a little imagination.
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[Tearlach]

Here's a idea I have seen crop up in several SF stories of late.
Cemetery planets, with huge casualty rates on both sides of a galactic conflict, whole planets are set aside for the internment and rememberence of the fallen.
Morbid I know but practical and could be a setting for an adventure "a la The good, the bad and the ugly".
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[Aaron_Thom]

Thats exactly what I was looking for Caroline thanks. I was just putting some general stuff up is all, just to get the ball rolling and thanks Tearlach for the idea's.
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[Evan_Himmel]

I think i am interested in being a front line command for one of Blue's forces.

Thou my charicter in a battle feild he tends to refer to the three Ps. 1) Be Profestional, 2) be Polite, 3) Have a Plan to kill every person you come across (if the need ever comes to do so.)

In short, He would achualy aim and fire one shot from a handgun and hit some one while every one else is shooting like the A-Team.

[Shadow_Twisted]

As far as Samuel, well I see him being more or less a side character. One of those classic rogue characters that lends aid to the good when possible, but is still supposed to be on the payroll of the evil side.

Generally he'd have a role that's best left on trust, like a spy or an assassin. As he was already an assassin in canon, I assume spy would be better for a fictional setting.

[Drofgod969]

I like the idea. One question thou. Is it Warhammer 40,000 with melee wepons and guns or starwars with only guns and lazers?
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[Aaron_Thom]

I was thinking more Warhammer/Starcraft. Not everyone is going to have melee weapons, just the elite fighters. Most foot soldiers will be armed with projectile weapons and a few plasma weapons. However bayonets can be fitted onto the weapons, sorry no chainsaw swords.

The Tanks and other ground assault vehicles will be have either projectile, laser and/or plasma weapons. Same holds true for aircraft.

Now the battle cruisers and other star ships, including space fighters, will NOT have any projectile weapons. Only Plasma and laser. Reason being is well you're in space. If you fire a projectile weapon then you're going to get a recoil that will place havoc in keeping the ship stable.

I'm open to suggestions on what the body armor will look like for both sides.
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[Wolf Stride]

My suggestion sucks but....
Killzone armor.
Helghast for Blue's troops, with a slight change in them.
For the Mary's troops i have...
FF7 Shinra suits?
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[Aaron_Thom]

Killzone yes, most definitely... FF7 eh not so much. Hmm let me think here. I'm thinking more on line with Halo, not spartan the marine armor, or something else.
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[Aaron_Thom]

Yeah but... I don't know we'll keep that one on the back burner. I was also thinking of other body armor types like from the game Mass Effect like this one...

http://www.frictionlessinsight.com/revpics2/MassEffect/MassEffectC.jpg

or

Command and Conquer 3...

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k244/flyingtoretilas/command--conquer-tiberium-wars.jpg
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[Wolf Stride]

If it has to be from those 2, it would have to be the ones from Mass Effect.
I was already thinking what would would mine wear.....
Oh hey.
I remember that Caroline had placed a validated point on the girls being possible Damsels in Distress.
I though about "What if Scarlett Blut was CO on one of the units?".
But this you're story, so im just adding something to the closet to just get some dust.
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[Aaron_Thom]

I actually like her ideas. I was just adding things at random. So if the ladies want to be soldiers, spies, assassins, Spec Ops, Officers, Guards, Medics, Pilots, Drivers/Gunners or whatever. It doesn't matter to me.

Thomas is a Seargent
Samuel is a Merc
Evan is an officer is Simon Blue's forces
Wolf you're the head Surgeon
and so forth

So as you can see we have a variety here. In truth I'm will for suggestions for any and all characters, whether it be Royal, Main Comic Characters and even side characters, whatever I'm open. This is a group project in my eyes so any and all ideas are very much appreciated.
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[Caroline]

((Aaron, mind if I post an intro-story to your game idea? You'd be welcome to use it if you want.))

[Caroline]

((I'm going to post it anyway, so... neyah Mind you sci-fi isn't one of my stronger suits for storytelling.))

Even on a main trade route of the Rim Concordant, Sapphire Space Station never saw much business. It went months, at times, without seeing anything other than re-supply ships. But lately, all sorts of craziness had started. At first, garbled partially jammed transmissions requesting aid sounded off the sat-com relays. Then ships with severe hull damage started drifting past the station. A combat ship from Valley 6 even drifted past, plasma burns scarring the entire length of the ship. When rescue crews were sent out to the it, they found all crew aboard were dead… killed by enemy raiders. Concerned that pirates had begun to act up again, the station sent out the two frigates that they had to drive off the lawless bandits. The frigates never returned. Requests for military aid to the new leader, High Princess Mary, went unanswered. Then sat-com began to receive messages demanding total surrender, else the Imperium would conquer without quarter. Again, the crew sent requests for aid and instructions to High Princess Mary and her new Rim Concordant government. Still no reply was heard from the new government.

Ships from the border with the Imperium continued to flood past Sapphire Space Station, as its crew watched from the command deck. Ships packed full of refugees from planets conquered by the Imperium. Each day, starship traffic along the route grew bringing news from the border. News from the border had all been saying one thing. The Imperium was on the march.

“Well, crap. That makes twelve ships from Anitox, Fourteen from Devin’s Landing. I suppose then that the rumors are true that the Anitox Twins have fallen already. I’m telling ya, that Princess Mary is worthless. She’s going to get the entire lot of us overrun in a matter of days. Maybe we should do what the Star League colonies are doing, and defending themselves. Princess Mary sure isn’t defending us,” grumbled the crewman.

Updating the star-map, the navigation officer chimed in, “If the Anitox Twin’s have fallen, that’s a total of twenty-four planets in four days. Including Mezion, Hive, and the zero-g shipyards at Kent Station. Them Imperium guys know exactly where to hit us. We need some guns here, and fast.”

“I still can’t believe this whole war started because we were given as some dowry to Czar Simon’s new wife. We haven’t been part of the Imperium since… well shoot the quarantine,” commented another of the crew.

“That’s enough out of the two of you,” barked the station commander. “What’s the new count?”

The deck officer replied, “Eight hundred new refugees today, sir. That puts the total at forty-five hundred. Three times over station capacity. Oh, and a new ship docked too. From Minnesota Prime.”

Shock draining the color out of his face the station commander said, “You gotta be kidding me… Minnesota Prime. That place actually has guns… and lots of ‘em. And that’s not even mentioning the satellite defense network. Those wackos would never retreat from their homeworld. You’re telling me the Imperium has already taken Minnesota Prime? That puts them at less than one jump from us.”

Shruging the deck officer replied, “I guess so, sir.”

“I’m telling ya, Star League ain’t stupid. Princess Mary’s got no idea what she’s doing, and by the time she makes a decision, we’ll all be part of the Imperium. I say we haul ass before the Imperium gets here. Else we might as well start learning the Imperium anthem.”