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Xebulon
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| Marx-Paragon wrote: | somehow, i really dont think thats gonna stop henk  |
I can see it now: Henk, lying on the ground tied in a pretzel with his own tail, saying, "So, see you Thursday then?"
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| Xebulon wrote: | | Marx-Paragon wrote: | | somehow, i really dont think thats gonna stop henk |
I can see it now: Henk, lying on the ground tied in a pretzel with his own tail, saying, "So, see you Thursday then?" |
something like that 
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MrWolf12
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| Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 5:46 pm Post subject: |
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Sorry, Henk....couldn't help myself!! LOL
Birds tweeted, filling the trees above in sweet sounds, as Gabrielle walked towards the cobra, her hips swaying. Behind her, that long tail switched, tossing the thick crimson fur draping it this way and that. Step after step, closer she drew towards the serpent. Her eyes focused, shining with a feral light from within, matched by the gleam of her sharp teeth as her lips pulled back in a predatory smile. A midday breeze caught the mane of dark wavy hair that flowed behind her head, sending it to flutter. About her muscular legs, the flaps of her skirt moved in time with her steps.
Suddenly, she was upon him, and with a strength that shocked him, pushed him into a nearby tree with a thud. Another surprise to him was that he had to look up to see her face, as she was nearly a head taller. Powerful, talon tipped fingers dug into his shoulders, pinning him to the rough trunk.
“So, “ the female wolverine began, her voice clear, crystalline, yet edged in the same carnivorous glint that shaded her eyes, “I hear you think you can handle me.”
Closer she moved, now nose to nose with the snake, and, with a growl, “Lets find out.”
And….at that moment….there was heard a scream that shook the trees, flushing dozens of birds from there nests and into the air!
Gabrielle stepped back, one arm proped onto the other, as she rested her face in a hand, tapping her finger against her temple. “Hmmmm…” she murmured, studying the sight before her.
The wolverine then shrugged.
“Well, at least you seem to be flexible enough. Still, you need to work on that stamina threshold if you want to get anywhere near me!” and with a fiendish giggle, the still clothed Gabrielle turned and walked back into the woods.
Behind her, just regaining consciousness, was a snake, tied into a lovely Windsor knot, around the trunk of a tree. |
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Lidia_Apricot
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| Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 6:13 pm Post subject: |
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(Hee! Hee!  )
In the forest, outside of the town, BonBon, a young ferret, Lidia, walks through the woods, enjoying the soft breeze blowing pass by her and enjoying the scenery of tall, healthy, forest tree around her on a lovely, sunny, day. Suddenly, the young ferret see something on a specific tree that sticks out from the scene. She carefully, but quickly walk towards that specific tree. When she is six feet away to the tree, she see her cold-blooded reptile friend, Henk Cobra, with his body tied up in a knot around the tree trunk. Lidia lets out a big sigh and take three steps towards Henk. Instead of helping him in his tied up situation, Lidia kneel herself down to the reptile's eye level.
The young ferret poke Henk's nose and says to him flatly,
"You know...I had thought the day you would get reject by a female, is the day you will be in a clothing store, behind the store window."
Lidia gently pet Henk on the head and smile. "A disappointment, huh?"
(Hope you don't mind, Mr. Wolf. Just want to have a little fun, too^^!) |
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MrWolf12
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| Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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| Lidia_Apricot wrote: | | (Hope you don't mind, Mr. Wolf. Just want to have a little fun, too^^!) |
not at all. Was funny  |
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Mystic
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| Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:00 pm Post subject: |
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*With a sound of twigs snapping and brush being pushed out of the way, a dazzling dressed black feline drops from the tree the snake was tied too.* As much as I enjoy the plight of others, you're far more fun to see chasing tail than being tied up by it. *She smiles to the helpless snake, giving him a hand or two to be untied.* Be a bit more careful with your selections in the future, alright hun? *She coos with a motherly kindness and a touch to his chin. Then a stage coach arrives just as she turns and mounts up into it. With a final fave and a blown kiss, the coach travels off.*
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MrWolf12
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Gabrielle smiled, shaking her head.
Leaning against a tree, her arms crossed, she watched the twin visits the cobra received in such a short amount of time. Laughing silently at the little ferret's lighthearted scolding. Then, as the dark feline aided the snake in being free of the knots, remarked to herself at how some are way too nice.
Everyone now gone, the wolverine stretched, and walked off....a gurgling stomach hoping very much that her brother had something cooking!
~not trying to RP...just happy to have something to write.~ |
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Lidia_Apricot
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| Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:04 pm Post subject: |
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| Good way to end our short story, don't you think? :3 |
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Lidia_Apricot
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| Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:47 pm Post subject: |
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Nice, Mr. Wolf. You made a new thread for your story without interruption. :3
Look forward reading more. :3
((I know! I know! I repeat this sentence like a million times. I sound like a broken record! You must be getting tired of hearing that, huh?>M<))
Anyway.....Well....If you want to....you can use my character, you know, in the future, if you want, for your story...You don't have to, of course! Just...letting you know that... you have my permission to do so.^^! |
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MrWolf12
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| Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:59 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you.
Yes, I got tired of wading through it all to see what i did and did not post! Also, there's a bit more to the last post that i added, introducing a new character. And you are not sounding like a broken record at all! Believe me, right now I need all the encouragement i can get!!
I'd be honored to include Miss Apricot in my writings. Thank you very much! |
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Lidia_Apricot
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| Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:30 pm Post subject: |
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Your Welcome.
Well, then I'll be happy to give you some compliments and encouragement for you, Mr. Wolf. 
Yes. I did noticed you introduce a new character in your last post. A Doe that was looking for the little girl rabbit. :3
And that is good because is telling me you are progressing your writing little by little! ^w^ |
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Xebulon
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| Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 9:59 pm Post subject: |
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Ah, a dedicated story thread, excellent! I'll have to re-read it all next time I get a slow night at work.  It's good to see you hack in the grip of your muse again. Your writing has always been of high quality, and an inspiration to lazy hacks like a certain ursine who shall remain nameless. 
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MrWolf12
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Slow night? When has that last happened?
Thank you for the kind words, my friend. Yet, when it comes to writing, I'd say you deserve a 'high quality' complement as well. It was some of your story that put me back into the right frame of mind to continue.
For that i thank you. |
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MrWolf12
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| Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 11:29 am Post subject: |
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To Miss Apricot...
Are you still ok with having a small part in my story? |
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Lidia_Apricot
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Yes, Sir.
I am OK having my character be in your story. |
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MrWolf12
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Thank you.
Planning your character's part now....so if I may ask....what would you like it to be?.....any ideas? |
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Lidia_Apricot
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Hmmm....Not sure, really.
I guess you can start off as her leaving her maid job from a Hotel for today and walks around town for a while. Then, I guess, she see Brandon selling flowers (or walking around, your choice. ^^!) and walk to him and gives him a friendly hello and hang around with him, for the heck of it, and talk for a while.
That's what I have in mind right now. ^^! |
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MrWolf12
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Ok....hmmmmm....
I have a few ideas....thank you
Hope you like it. |
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Was this just for Lidia, or were you looking for female participants for your story Mr.Wolf?
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MrWolf12
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| Mystic wrote: | | Was this just for Lidia, or were you looking for female participants for your story Mr.Wolf? |
Im open to anyone that would like to be part of my writings...
....are you offering to be included as well? |
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Mystic
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| MrWolf12 wrote: | Im open to anyone that would like to be part of my writings...
....are you offering to be included as well? |
Well that depends on what sort of scenes.
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MrWolf12
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| Mystic wrote: | | Well that depends on what sort of scenes. |
I want to try and finish this chapter im doing now. After that, Im going to try and include whoever wishes to be.
As for the kinds of scenes, all i can say is Im not planning on anything of a sexual nature...at least not yet. Saying that, I will do the best I can to adhere to the true nature of your character. |
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MrWolf12
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| dragonfly wrote: | | i would just like to ask but dose this apply to people with avatar's only or can people without them be a part of it? |
No avatar is needed. I would just need a detail of your character so I can portray them the best I can. |
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MrWolf12
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| dragonfly wrote: | | my fursona details are on the custom avatar list or should i post a small detail here as my pc wont let me make a link |
I found it. Thanks for the interest.
Both yourself and Mystic may end up being the first ones to meet Gabrielle. |
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MrWolf12
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| dragonfly wrote: | thank u mrwolf im glad u will add link into it.
oh nearly forgot your story is realy good wish i could write like u can |
Thank you kindly. |
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