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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:31 pm Post subject: hmmm character disscussion. a retired spy and gun |
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well I was wandering.... will this story of my char will be logical?
sorry for making new history thread for my char but I just curious for preparation of my char in the next 6 months
well what do you think if she is a goverment spy? who is actually having been sent to bon bon to have vacation? or maybe in a mission? either one of those XP
and because she is a spy it might contribute to the skills she has with the dual guns http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Borchardt_C-93 that I talked with mr xebulon in this topic http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=6150&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=160
so she maybe went to bon bon and have a new job there? maybe a waitress? or a new comer to the town? or maybe a new employee for Betty to work for her in the Delight Castle? maybe as prostitute or waitress/bartender like Dalila or Waitress/chipseller like Ophelia in the casino?
so basically she could be a retired spy gone prostitute/waitress or an undercover spy like the real spy called matahari
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mata_Hari
becaused she used to be a spy, there might be some comedical humorous events when she tries to fit into the town and the job cause she never been there before.
also I am a bit curious of the borchardt weapon. is it a pistol with a cartidge like beretta pistol so can be fired several times before reloading? or is it like a single fire single reload type like reload after each shot?
if its a single fire single reload type then maybe chinese type 17 pistol like in this mgs 3 movie used BY EVA will be better for dual wielding?
(soorry no wiki article is found for this pistol >< so not sure if its already made in 1895 ><)
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:44 pm Post subject: |
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I think you're making it a bit too complicated if your intention is to have your fursona show up in the comic. The amount of "screen time" that Vanessa can devote to Royal members is limited, and trying to show a character that's a spy but working undercover as something else, is probably a bit much.
Your best bet of seeing your avatar in the comic is to have it fit in with the story and the nature of the comic. Just making her a prostitute would probably work better for you. In that way, Vanessa could easily include her in a sex scene, or simply have her appear in the background at times when the characters are shown in the Delight Castle. Of course you could always write a background story about her working as a spy before retiring.
I'm not saying that what you've thought of is a bad idea, just that it might not fit that well with how Bon Bon isn't some adventure story, and considering how you'd like to see your fursona in the comic. _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:47 pm Post subject: |
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Symphony wrote: | I think you're making it a bit too complicated if your intention is to have your fursona show up in the comic. The amount of "screen time" that Vanessa can devote to Royal members is limited, and trying to show a character that's a spy but working undercover as something else, is probably a bit much.
Your best bet of seeing your avatar in the comic is to have it fit in with the story and the nature of the comic. Just making her a prostitute would probably work better for you. In that way, Vanessa could easily include her in a sex scene, or simply have her appear in the background at times when the characters are shown in the Delight Castle. Of course you could always write a background story about her working as a spy before retiring.
I'm not saying that what you've thought of is a bad idea, just that it might not fit that well with how Bon Bon isn't some adventure story, and considering how you'd like to see your fursona in the comic. |
ohhh okies thats not a bad idea so spy is a big no then for now
so maybe just a retired spy or new comer to town working at delight castle? that is good too
hmmm oki then what about the guns though? I see some of you guys uses sword XP can a girl used 2 guns wielded? should it be china 17 or the borchard? _________________ My fursona can be seen here
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LabrnMystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:49 pm Post subject: |
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You can be a "retired" spy who wanted to leave her old life behind for the chance of a pleasure filled life, away from the bureaucrats and BS that comes with it.
If Vanessa gives you a little extra, you might even be able to accidentally "defend yourself" when one of the interested men comes up behind you, in hopes to seduce you, only to trigger your built in spy reflexes. XD _________________ The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last. |
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:52 pm Post subject: |
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LabrnMystic wrote: | You can be a "retired" spy who wanted to leave her old life behind for the chance of a pleasure filled life, away from the bureaucrats and BS that comes with it.
If Vanessa gives you a little extra, you might even be able to accidentally "defend yourself" when one of the interested men comes up behind you, in hopes to seduce you, only to trigger your built in spy reflexes. XD |
ahhh i have seen some of it happens in anime and such XD very funny very comedical
but in the end it all comes with Vanessa's decision on how I could fit in either as retired spy or just a normal newcomer coming to town _________________ My fursona can be seen here
http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=197025#197025
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:53 pm Post subject: |
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Symphony wrote: | I don't know anything about guns, but keep in mind that weapons aren't allowed in the Delight Castle, I think, and I'm not really sure how many Royal members we've seen carrying their weapons in the comic. |
ohh guns and swords are probably just gonna be drawn in the avatar drawing mostly right? and won;t be featured in the comic at all? I understand :3 _________________ My fursona can be seen here
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:56 pm Post subject: |
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Kiala_Tiagra wrote: |
ohh guns and swords are probably just gonna be drawn in the avatar drawing mostly right? and won;t be featured in the comic at all? I understand :3 |
Well, I honestly don't know at the moment. I just know that Vanessa has said that people can't take their weapons into the Delight Castle, but I don't know whether the restrictions apply to the rest of Bon Bon as well. I can't remember noticing many weapons in the comic. _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon
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Drofgod969 Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:16 pm Post subject: |
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Show type wepons and hidden types are allowed. If they are big they have to be put up. Ex. Conner's great sword, he has to keep it in his room when he is out. But on job i think that doesn't apply. But his hidden dagger he can keep on him at all times, untill he uses it of course. _________________ yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:09 pm Post subject: |
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I was trying to post earlier when you were proposing your "dual-wield" proposal, but my session timed out.
I can tell that you've been inspired heavily by anime (which in turn, is heavily inspired by Hollywood), and so maybe you're not going for full realism. But if you do want to have a little more believability, then I think that you should probably avoid using what is essentially the prototype of the modern Luger pistol (which was a handcannon back in the day) and go with a derringer since they are easily concealed. I'd think that walking around with enough firepower to take down a whole mob will do nothing but attract attention to yourself.
I know that my character is not exactly a realistic person, so maybe this is the kettle calling the pot a charcoal grayish color. |
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 9:02 pm Post subject: |
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well i have to say that the first pistol that you picked has a box mag along with this statement The Borchardt C-93 was the first semi-automatic pistol i would assume that it would be a semi. _________________ you all saw it, the orphanage attacked me first. |
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 11:46 am Post subject: |
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hmmm oki soo I suppose its cool to maybe occupation as a spy who have to work as a prostitute or waitess all of a sudden. so now the question is...chinse type 17 pistol? or borchardt?
was type 17 available in 1895? _________________ My fursona can be seen here
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 12:19 pm Post subject: |
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... i cant find any info on the type 17... but form what i have found the type 14 witch in order wise would be before the type 17 was made in 1925
any way the Borcherdt would be the one i would go with but that's just me..
it is a semi with a 12 round clip(not to sure if its more or less) and well would be what you need in a tight pench. _________________ you all saw it, the orphanage attacked me first. |
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 12:58 pm Post subject: |
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.... if that's the case then use the 357.mag its so cool.
and if your a good shot then 1 bullet form it will put any one down no matter what...well in this kind of standard. _________________ you all saw it, the orphanage attacked me first. |
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LabrnMystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:22 pm Post subject: |
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Found a pistol that could work for her, I think. The Nagant was made in 1893, and can even have silencers attached to them, making it a good, semi-auto for a spy like her. ^_^ _________________ The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last. |
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Mata hare? Now that I'd like to see. _________________ Wow, sarcasm! That's original. |
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:00 pm Post subject: |
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henkcobra wrote: | Very nice all these pistols, but can you also dance to impress the officers like the real mata hare. |
aye I am a spy, a femme fatale. can be like mata hari, but deadly as well hmm? x3 _________________ My fursona can be seen here
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon
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henkcobra wrote: | Kiala_Tiagra wrote: | henkcobra wrote: | Very nice all these pistols, but can you also dance to impress the officers like the real mata hare. |
aye I am a spy, a femme fatale. can be like mata hari, but deadly as well hmm? x3 |
Hmm, I hope that you RP. I look forward to meet you then. |
ahh I am still praacticing rp myself, hope you guys could help _________________ My fursona can be seen here
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henkcobra Royal Member of BonBon
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Kiala_Tiagra wrote: | henkcobra wrote: | Kiala_Tiagra wrote: | henkcobra wrote: | Very nice all these pistols, but can you also dance to impress the officers like the real mata hare. |
aye I am a spy, a femme fatale. can be like mata hari, but deadly as well hmm? x3 |
Hmm, I hope that you RP. I look forward to meet you then. |
ahh I am still praacticing rp myself, hope you guys could help |
First it's best to join a RP how is now rolling. that's how I did it and it worked good for me.
try to join some of these and you will find your way.
http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=6811
http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=6483
http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=6805
http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=6671
but if you join just must give a reply or else the RP stops and gave a little discription of your avatar, grender, spiece, hight, clothes. _________________ Avatar: http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7830
My favorite RP please join and dominate me : http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=6811&start=0
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LabrnMystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 4:03 pm Post subject: |
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Beware my dear. They'll suck you in if your not prepared.
Though, as you have me on messenger, I can help you with your RPing etiquette and what not. I believe there was a thread giving pointers as well. _________________ The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last. |
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 10:15 pm Post subject: |
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LabrnMystic wrote: | Found a pistol that could work for her, I think. The Nagant was made in 1893, and can even have silencers attached to them, making it a good, semi-auto for a spy like her. ^_^ |
The Nagant revolrer would work for that type of character. Though keep in mind it's not the smallest of pistols. _________________ I like old jokes. With them I know when to laugh. |
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