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whispering feathers Rank: Senior Member

Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 186
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 6:45 pm Post subject: Elevate My Minds Eye... |
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Elevate my imagination that educates my minds eye
Thirty six images plus the way u enter the set
Focuses on the truth if I could press ur body next 2 mine
Nothing short on ur pure definition of erotic
Beauty is 4 the amateur that fails 2 release
What they only want 2 control when u allow us 2 go
Out of control fueling the kind of fantasy in ur gallery
Baby ur digital images seem 2 come alive
Pushing the envelope a little bit further
With ur phone or live web cam show
Exposing what’s really on ur mind and how ur body
Really reacts when its behind closed doors
Loosen up with a light conversation
Here keep on talkin as I turn on the distraction
What were u saying b4, oh baby J3a ur so HOT!
Nebraska ur mind is what makes my body quiver 4 what u GOT!
Orange is the new color of PASSION
Feathers is there anyway u can release this TENTION
All of my babies have a role 2 play
Fulfilling this virtual relationship making up 4 all that he is not
Referring 2 the one who understands
My imagination has 2 run wild with my hands
Each finger representing all of my men
Pressing my body, caressing me u all know how 2 hit the spot
Really makes me wet look cant u see my thighs glisson
Working my body b4 u realize another hour has cum n gone
Go on…
Satisfy ur woman
Believe me I know ill b the one who’s on ur mind
Cause Tiger like every Alley Cat I only pure 4 those who wanna make me mine
ok, ok this is sort of a different angle of a third person point of view as how Alley interacts with all of us individually. i tried 2 mention the ones im most familiar with so i am sorry if i 4got anyone... but i hope u guys like this piece and esspecially Alley
let me know what u guys think...
Kevin _________________ With Lots of Love n Hugs!!!
Kevin (Whispering Feathers) |
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tyger Rank: Veteran

Joined: 07 Mar 2005 Posts: 837
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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Pretty cool poem, Feathers. I especially like the Tiger part at the end (I assume you meant purr instead of pure).  |
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j3a Rank: Super Veteran

Joined: 15 Apr 2005 Posts: 1010
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 10:59 pm Post subject: |
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nice one feathers!!
i always like your poems, but i thought that this one was extra special because you threw our names in there!
great job as usual!! |
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