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I'm interested because it's one of my favorite Victorian subjects. BUT..! You need to fully update your fursona. His last name is Wolf, but the rest describes the animal Sloth. Fix that first. _________________ "In Excelsis Neo."
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No, dude. Your fursona's entire description is of a sloth. You need to type up a new profile for a wolf that's into Victorian occultism and stuff. Do that first. _________________ "In Excelsis Neo."
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Well, I thought you had changed 'Andrew' to a wolf. Also, a furry's animal aspect usually reflects a real life feature. I mean, I like climbing trees and Tai Chi, but 'sloth' never came to my mind even though sloth hang around trees and move in slow and precise ways.
If you want to keep 'Andrew' as a blue sloth, it's cool because it's far more unique than wolves, foxes, cats and dragons. But tell me FN, what results do you get from these animal quizzes?
http://animalinyou.com/test.php
http://www.whatanimalami.com/ _________________ "In Excelsis Neo."
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furrynerd wrote: | well you cna jump to that about tai chi. but for em sloths are lazy and laid back like me i think maybe koala but sloth seems more unique to me. |
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no..not here to ridicule...not my intent..and I am very pleased to see your taking steps to improve your RP...good on you mate! _________________ Marco Antonio Hazzardi |
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nah..I'm good but thank you so much for the offer. _________________ Marco Antonio Hazzardi |
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Careful, FN. You kind of repeated yourself, and it made me re-phrase myself. I'll try to keep my parts simple for a little while.
Okay, keep it going. _________________ "In Excelsis Neo."
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Oh, boy...
What I know about these subjects in real life is complicated. Since this is your story, you have to tell it - not me.
This is your first true lesson about writing fiction: it's all based on real life. You might be scared of what you will find, BUT YOU HAVE TO LOOK IT UP.
Use Wikipedia or an encyclopaedia to learn about what you need to write.
Then invent the rest. Take notes of what you like when you read it.
Go! _________________ "In Excelsis Neo."
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