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 Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 8:45 pm Post subject: A fortunate meeting ((for me furynerd and mayfeild)) |
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resting againt a large tall oak tree sat a tall muscular king cheetah who was heavily panting haveing just jogged from his house to the town of bonbon.
he had decide to take a well desverd rest and have his lunch witch he had packed in his bag along with his two samurai swords called luna and sol
looking up at the clear sky he smiled and flicked his tail as he took a bite out of his tuna sandwitch and started pulling a book out of his bag.
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((no wrong all wrong youn need to check ya spelling and grammer for erros i see quite a few and there should be a ? when andrew ask's a question also think in ya head before posting about what andrew's dose and also rember to detail what andrew can see dont just rush it take ya time and also im a king cheetah not a normal cheetah.))
link still stareing at the sky eat the last of his sandwitch and was about to open his book when his ear twiched at hearing a familer voice.
putting his book down on the grass next to him he looked up to see a brown furred timber wolf who he sort of know but didnt really talk to much
"ohhhh hello andrew right?" link said in a rather breathless voice looking at the brown timber wolf.
picking up his book again link rifled though the pages and found the one he had last been reading and placed his finger on it so he woudnt lose his page.
then looking at the guitar in andrews hands he shock his head "not at all it is a free world after all" link softly said as he begane reading his book.
((now im gonna rate ya post's from 1 to 10 and also give ya the truth about ya post i rate ya post a 2-3 you made numorus spelling and grammer erros and you payed no attione to detail or ya surronds at all so in my eyes ya post sucked balls now im a very blunt person and i tell the truth so DONT COMPLAIN about what i said that is just who i am just try harder in ya next post))
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| Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:17 pm Post subject: |
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There was a red fox nearby the two men. She was sprawled out on the grass, simply relaxing and enjoying the peaceful day. The sun was shining on her orange fur and her reddish hair was shining in the light. There was a look of pure relaxation on her face.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 7:34 pm Post subject: |
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"Well thanks" "yeah my names Andrew" "I know we just don't speak much" "Well nice meeting up i only know a few people in Bon bon" He says in his plain tone. tTo the King cheetah
He starts to play his guitar riffs which are like Blues style riffs. He sees it's a nice peaceful day. Thats very relaxing and he gets on his back and stretches out while he plays. He then sees a red fox. But waits to speak to her.
"So Link what you reading"
He got a book after he was playing which he recently bought from Leafs store. Which was the complete works of Edgar Allen Poe. That he grabbed out of his guitar case. Which holds his replacement string,the book he picked out of it and other accessory's.
(ok feel like this is better. But I wondering what's the difference from a king cheetah and a cheetah)
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The red fox simply laid on the grass, a light breeze blowing her reddish hair around. She looked perfectly content on staying there and paid no mind to the noises and other furs in the park, they were of no concern to her. She crossed her arms and an extremely short glimpse of the side of her breast could be seen as she moved. She was simply wearing a grey sleeveless shirt and a pair of dark green pants.
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| Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 12:53 am Post subject: |
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((a little better but still loads of spelling eross's and grammer in the wrong place i rate this post 3-4 so it still sucks as for the diffrace in a normal cheetah and king cheetah is mainly there fur parrten normal cheethas have just spots all over there body while a king cheetah has three black stipes running down from the top of there spines to the bottom of there tail base. this happens becuse of a gentic mutaion in there gene's result in the diffrent fur coats that they have also king cheeta's have a slitly larger bone stucter makeing them taller then the normal cheetah scintes belived that king cheetah's where a hybrid mix of a cheetah and lepoard but this proved wrong in 1945 i think and was then proved that king cheetah's are indeed full breed cheetah's being so they are icredibly rear beutiful magestic cats witch are near to exsiteing becuse of human's))
link once again put his book down on the grass and let out a small yawn before grabbing a aussie styled hat witch was hanging on a low branch and placeing it on his head covering his red and blue eye's.
then looking to his left link's eyes feel on to a beautiful red vixen who was sprawled out on the grass near to the two males's oak tree. giveing her nody a quick scan link then gave his attione back to andrew and softly growled.
"ahhh i am reading macbeth from the very talnted writer shakespear i love his storys and how he captives on the carter's feeling and surrounding's"
the king cheetah said looking at the vixen again then smileing in a pleasnt way he wisperd to andrew so the vixen coudnt hear them
"pretty isn't she look how her red fur shines in the sunlight giveing it that sillky look god woudnt i give to spend a night with her"
link smiled still eyeing her.
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| Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:37 pm Post subject: |
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((FURRYNERD what am i trying to teach to? spelling and fucking GRAMMER once again for the third bloody time you have faild to do this corretly now you will face my wrath as the one HELPING you i rate this post a big fat 0 mainly for grammer. honstly the spelling wasnt to bad but the grammer oh my god i could train a fucking chimp to use better grammer seirosly reading that was like haveing someone kick me in the bollocks while wearing steel toe capped boots))
link looked at andrew and gave a soft growl before submerging him self back in to his book and shacking his head
"yes she is a beautiful vixen" link said loud enoth for the red vixen to hear him
sofly smileing and turning the page he looked out the conner of his left eye to see what would happen"
((DO NOT COMPLAIN about what i said if i have to teach you this way untill i see improvents in your post's so be it i am now satun to you i am bruitly honest and will keep being like this untill i see improvment made))
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| Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 8:08 pm Post subject: |
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((Jeeze Link. Why dontcha give us a novel on cheetahs.  And Furry, if I may, when typing what your character is saying, put the entire bit in quotes. That way you don't have to do every sentence.))
"Why do you want to know?" the vixen said with her eyes still closed. There was a blue hat that was resting on her chest. She picked it up and set it over her eyes, blocking the sunlight a bit.
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| furrynerd wrote: | | "I'd just like to know the name of you" "You beautiful vixen" he says with a happy tone. |
((those dont need to be there just put a comma stop doing that your DOLT))
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| furrynerd wrote: | | (Thanks hoshi so it should have been "I'd just like to know the name of you,You beautiful vixen" he says with a happy tone. |
((well more like: "I would just like to know your name, you beautiful vixen" he said with a slight tilt of his head
God why am i helping))
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((>_> Where'd dragon go?))
"Sorry, but flattery isn't going to get you my name." the fox said putting her arms behind her head to act as a pillow.
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"Good for you." the fox said as she continued to lay on the grass, her hair slightly swaying around as the wind blew.
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| Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 5:14 pm Post subject: |
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link slaped a hand to his face at what seemed to be a complety tactless advance to talk to the vixen shacking his head and looking up at andrew he shock his head
"what was that surpose to be? all that looked like was you asking her if she wanted to see your trouser snake and for her to roll on her back and open her legs"
link stood up and placed his book on the floor link know she wasnt like the typical woman of this town she would be a lot tougher to crake and get any kind of converstaion out of her.
looking around link spoted a red rose bush and walking up to it he gave it a gentle sniff and very carefully pluked one of the red flowers of and carefully removed the thorns
looking back to where the vixen was link slowly walked over to where she was relaxing and smiled before placeing the single rose next to her and bowing.
then witout saying a word he walked back to the tree he had been sitting under and puicked up his book again.
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| Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 5:28 pm Post subject: |
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The fox sat up and looked around, opposite the direction of the two men. She set her hat down on the grass and also on top of the rose that was set down beside her.
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link watching the vixen smirked knowing that would happen "ya see flattry and kindness to someone like her wont work"
smileing again link pulled out anothe sandwithckh from the bag next to him and looked at the contents seeing it was bacon and cheese smileing he took a bite out of it and looked up at the timber wolf.
"im not helping you to hit on woman that's just rude and i take offnce to what you just said woman are not picec's of meat that you can just point at and get a picec of"
link growled in a angry tone before biteing into his sandwitch again.
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The fox sighed "I can hear you two." she said a bit coldly looking straight. Her eyes could be barely seen, no certain coloring could be noticed.
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